Abortion.

The author begins by keeping a moderate approach, but ends with a statement supporting the "pro-choice" argument. The essay is informative with a little gramatical mistakes.

This is a logical and well-structured piece that needs a little work on the spelling /grammar.

I like that you pointed out all the different views on the subject. Maybe this will help out with letting everybody see the different ways people see this subject and make better choices on what they beleave.

First off, there are some potentially distracting gramatical errors that detract from the author's credibility. There are a few sentence fragments and punctuation errors which may give readers pause.


Another problem is that there is no "works cited" page for this essay. The author quotes a few outside sources, but doesn't give credit beyond in-text citations. A references page might be beneficial.


A few parts were a bit non-sensical, for example paragraph three contains this sentence: "Marquis is a strong pro-life, he feel that abortion is morally wrong, and that through act a person is deprived of life. His argument is based on the assumption." I think s/he meant to say "strong pro lifER" and "that through THIS act a person is deprived of life". This may come off as confusing to some readers.


Another problem is that your thesis isn't clearly defined. From what I gather from the introduction, this essay is only supposed to give readers a little information on all three stances? If this is the case, a little more objectivity might be in order. In a very well written informative essay, the author's personal views remain unknown to the reader--in this essay, however, his/her views are quite clear.


This is a good start, needs some work, but does have some potential.