The big bang theory
How the universe was created
How was this universe started? People still wonder. It's not simple as we all think; it's in fact very complex. Some people believe it to be science and some people think it's god that created everything. Many of us on earth believe that its all science, meaning astronomical observation and yet there are those who truly believe that it was the power of the all mighty god that made this all happen, many went to church, and was taught that the bible says that, the biblical story was the world was created six thousand years ago in a mere six days (1, pg26-27). These two factors have been very controversial; it has been decades, even centuries that geologists and paleontologists still have debates to prove their points. Well whether it is either science or god its up to you to decide. But the one thing that a lot of people believe to be what created this universe is the big bang theory. This scientific hypotheses made by astronomers are called a cosmological model. But through the entire information gather from satellites, scientific data, telescopes, observation evidence, etc., shows that the most reasonable theory is the big bang theory.
The Big Bang was the fiery explosion that is thought to have given rise to the universe. The Big Bang theory happened approximately ten to twenty-five billion years ago, and it happened in a time period between 10^43 to 10^35, when the earth was still at its infancy state; when it was about 300,000 years old. At this age the earth was just a dense, hot fireball. Even though it has cooled down drastically, it was still as hot as the red giant star. The earth was still glowing wit hydrogen and helium, approximately 25 percent helium...
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Avoid using 3rd person pronouns such as you and we. I am not too sure about your thesis. Don't start a thesis with but, and it tends to be a little drawn out. Make it short and to the point. You do not need all that information about gathering information(about the Big bang) in your thesis. Its exlained above and throughout your body paragraphs. Personally, i would have mentioned something about "quarks", involving the string theory, just to broaden the view. Re-read your essay 3-5 more times. I am sure you will pick up all the fragments and verbaige that was not utilized. Other than that, the essay was pretty good. The information seemed accesible to most of us, could get a little more technical. Try to stick to your topic sentence. Dont run off on ideas that do not pertain to what your are supposed to be talking about in specific paragraphs. take it easy
it might be worth mentioning that the reason the universe's density doesn't come out right is the existence of dark matter. also the existence of some immeasurable energy source that is speeding up the expansion of the universe. just watch the discovery channel. other than a few grammatical errors and word usage, you might want to clean up your topic sentence or the whole first paragraph. solid paper otherwise...
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Fairly well informed essay. I would, however, like to know more about the sources you got your statistics and information from. This is a very interesting topic, but I think the sentence structure of the essay (fragments, commas, and such) make it a little more difficult to read. The essay would also be more interesting if you explained a little about the other theory of creation (god) as a counter argument to your main arguement.
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