CASE Study: Four Seasons Goes to Paris

Well done! Helps in my similar case study.

It was well written one atleast i likes it

"One of the worlds leading operator of luxury hotels in business for the last thirty years Four Seasons is successful due to exceptional personal customer service, adhering to standards, at the same time adopting to local customs and blending with the environment."

this would be better as:

One of the world's leading operators of luxury hotels, and in business for the last thirty years, Four Seasons is successful due to exceptional personal customer service and adhering to standards, while at the same time adopting to local customs and blending with the environment.

"The Four Seasons Hotel adheres firmly to its standards, according to the hotel management its standards are the foundations for all its properties, and every manager in the hotel has a clear perception of what the standards are, and they adhere to them, over a period of time these standards shape relationships between people and these relationships contribute in building a culture."

This is just one long run-on sentence. Ditto for the next paragraph. Periods and semicolons are wonderful things.

The has in the 5th paragraph should be have.

The article "The" doesn't have a human resource rule.

"the employees takes" should be the employees take.

Four Seasons should be capitalized throughout.

"The way four seasons entered the French market is one of the best ways to do business a business should adopt to the local cultures and blend in the environment, people are generally not that much in favor of a change and if you blend with the local environment the local community will adapt to the new business in the area and things will go smooth. The hired a French interior designer whose policy was to make the guest rediscover the hotel and make them feel how much better the new redesigned place was."

should be:

The way the Four Seasons entered the French market is one of the best ways to do business. A business should adapt to/adopt the local cultures and blend in with the environment. People are generally not that much in favor of a change; if you blend with the local environment the local community will adapt to the new business in the area and things will go smoothly. They hired a French interior designer whose policy was to make the guest rediscover the hotel and make them feel how much better the new redesigned place was.

"They had issues in adhering to the French labor laws. It's a country with strong unions[.] [I]n short lots was different in what goes on in US so the firm had to change its way of working. In France they have an emotional way of doing things[.] [T]he French did not take the company's golden rule seriously[;] they thought it was too American. They had an incredible pride in being French. The good thing about [the] French is [that] they can be very joyous and encouraging[;] but at the same time French temper also lashes out."

I don't understand what you mean with this sentence "It all ended up to how the four seasons came in to France was almost as important in what Four Seasons did."

"I would say they way..." should be I would say the way...

"The way four seasons done business across the globe according to the policy of Diversity and Strength their belief in diversity and singularity should be a guide to any business entering the global market. Look at the case of McDonald its almost uniform and unique all over the world, now in its vision this mite be the good thing about it but people are generally not that easy to adopt to new tastes, if a community favors more spicy food then for starters they mite visit a McDonald restaurant for a change but in the long run they mite avoid it. Same goes if it sells food that is not consumed in that community no one is going to buy it."

should be:

The way the Four Seasons has done business across the globe according to the policy of Diversity and Strength and their belief in diversity and singularity should be a guide to any business entering the global market. Look at the case of McDonald's: its almost uniform and unique all over the world. Now in its vision this might be the good thing about it but people are generally not that easy to adopt to new tastes. If a community favors more spicy food then for starters they might visit a McDonald's restaurant for a change but in the long run they might avoid it. Same goes if it sells food that is not consumed in that community: no one is going to buy it

You need to edit your essays. This was full of grammar errors. You also don't mention Paris or France in a meaningful way until halfway through your essay. I lost track of the topic.


I don't know what the previous commentors were thinking. Sorry to be harsh, but I call them as I see them.

I just looked at the grade level. This is pathetic. By college you should be able to write much better than this. I don't know how you received 84% for it. I'm glad I'm not going to your college. Talk about grade inflation. Sheesh.