CIS319 Information Management in Business: Software Quality

This looks like you needed to write 300 words in 15 mins and you used lots of "cramming" techniques like over-using sources.


You stated the obvious, and didn't show many reasons. I don't think you needed to define the basics.

Who would not guess that a software with little errors is better than one with many? No sir, this is not good enough and everything you wrote except for the first "paragraph" is from Wikipedia. Boy do I hate when people write papers based on Wikipedia, sure it's easy but not good enough!

A few mistakes here and there but with a bit of work it could be a lot better but its all very basic.

Too simple for an essay, less of point and debates...further wikipedia is not a credible references source...please remember it is not allow to use as a source of references.

There is far too little detail about a highly varied topic.

Wikipedia is not ALWAYS true, since people can openly edit topics which may not be the correct information. So therefore you should of used more websites to gain information to pad out the essay.

Extremely short and they cite wikipedia as a source. You should lengthen it and find a more reliable source than wikipedia.

couple typos and format errors. its not all too great.


I agree it seems like an essay written by a high school student 10th grade.

Although this was a decent attempt at an essay, this isn't one. First, it doesn't follow proper essay structure; second, the three arguments (even if you followed proper essay structure) are far too short; third, this does not meet college standards; fourth, as many people have stated: "wikipedia is not a reliable source."

This is a very well started essay but it is too short. You need to develop the essay with more informations.

This is a good topic; however, the actual essay was too short. The essay needs to be elaborated on

This would make a great essay if it was longer and more detailed.

It is OK but it is too short to understand clearly. I think the author should revise it.

I think that this essay is too short to be called an essay. I would title it a note, although it does pertain important information it could have had more detail to the programs and what they do.

This is so vague, I don't know about you but I am in IT also and find so much more to put into a paper than this. I saw another comment that you need to be more careful on quoting your sources.

Most of the information is just rehashed common knowledge for anyone barely computer literate. I suggest more thorough research to present a more informative read and to use more reliable sources than the notorious Wikipedia.

This only scratches the surface. Very small and basic.

this essay is way too short and needs more details. never use wikipedia as a source.

This article is very choppy. you should try to create a more background-including article

Way too short needs work! put more effort in writing each paragraph

You hardly get into the essay before it ends. It needs to be longer and to use a more reliable source than Wikipedia.

Although the majority of this essay was decent, you added a list in the middle of it. . . You should have integrated it into your text. Further, I felt your arguments were far too short. They had good ideas; however , you should expand on them. Further, although wikipedia is a good starting point for research, you need to have a more reliable source.

This essay is okay but it is too short. The arguments are good but their are far too few. Also most of the essay comes from one source which can lead to inaccuracy.

you need to elaborate more on your essay, otherwise it will not be accepted. it is short

Short essay can not show the essay quality,i can not catch your point.

the title is good but if you can elaborate more n i mean much much much more..... it would be nice....

Vague

This article is almost word for word from other sources, for example the second paragraph is the beginning of this article http://www.sciencedaily.com/articles/c/computer_so ftware.htm

Not only are some of the statements obvious, there not original work.

This essay is not thorough enough and seems to be only on the surface. The language is not formal enough and does not meet the standard of a college undergraduate. It seems like an essay written by a high school student 10th grade.

"Software that contains few defects is considered to have higher quality than software that contains many defects."


I suppose some readers might think this is profound. I think it is so completely obvious that I wonder that anyone had to write it.

grammar and sentence structure needs a little work, it is quite shocking that someone in undergraduate school wrote this. It looks as though a grade school kid did it.

was this paper written in five minutes or what. It seems to be plagiarized and wikipedia is not a source that colleges even take. Way too short needs more details!!!

This kind of information can be found on many data bases and internet sites and are stronger worded than this essay

this is a very strongly worded essay, but i personally think it may need more details or information as it looks a little short to me.. but this is just my opinion... hoped it helped :D

this is not an essay. Way too short and where is all the information??

It was a good start but u need more details.

Way too short with no structure and Wikipedia is not a credible source

This paper is not bad for a 300 word max paper. I do suggest that you stop using wikipedia since it is no longer a site that can be used by universities. Also be careful with plagiarism, try using your own thoughts or paraphrase and cite.

I am actually taking business management myself-- I,m on my last block for my associates--and if I would have ever turned in an essay like this it would have been thrown out--Wikipedia is not acceptable as a reference past the second block of classes in my college--However, on a positive note: If this were study notes I would say--Great Job!!--This would probably be useful in preparation for a final paper--However, you will need to paraphrase rather than quote so much of your information... If this was study notes--Maybe you will want to be more careful how you list papers in here for the next time--

Wikipedia is not allowed as a source in most schools.

Way too short, and has already been stated "Wikipedia is not a credible source"

This plagiarized piece of work that any body can pull of the internet is an essay???? Remove at once!!!!!

good start, very vague..

expand on your points and think of at least 2 more oh and never use wikipedia

your lecturers won't accept it for your bibliography!

The arguments you pose are far too brief and additionally wikipedia is not a reliable source too use.

This is way too short. And never use wikipedia as a source.

it seems that this is not an essay


but rather a report on software and its qualities


however, it is still useful


better luck next time mate

Looks to have more citations that actual thought put into it, and to quote several people, "Wikipedia is not a credible source," don't even think about using it in a college paper. Plus half of the "original thoughts" are plagiarized.

It was added on December 01, 2007. Why is it sill here???? Remove. It stinks!!! Gosh!!

This is great, and I learned a lot about software

I thought this was going to be a good report. Instead I find it to be stuff that is written in 5 minutes. Nothing useful here!

For College, Undergraduate level this text is far too short and simple. TODAY A 10year old child can tell more about software even without wikipedia. Not to speak about the definition of Quality. There are tones of materials to be described and discussed about both Software and Quality.The title of the text is very promissing but the rest is ...just nothing.

Seems to be plagiarized directly from the references the author gives. Also, wikipedia is just not a strong enough source to use in papers anymore.

don't try to quote from wiki

The information is fairly bland, more information would be more helpful. Maybe expand your essay a little more to help draw readers in.

This essay lacks clarity which makes it sink into a meaninglessness hole. What is the purpose of this essay? It barley even talks about software.

too shot, need more details. keep working on it.

This essay is too short.

&& wikipedia isn't a credible reference.


You could of added a lot more information.

I agree with previous posts,but useful and interesting stuff there and also you should explain a little more in details.

It seems a bit short.

Could have been more helpful if you went in to more details

That's more like a paragraph. Come on, step it up!

add more detail to it..its not very clear

This essay has goos startup, but it is too short. Author needs to put more detail in to the essay and then it will be fine.

started of OK but way to short far a complex topic. more/more reliable sources needed. some obvious typos.

quite easy to take information from.

This article is very close to the sources it cites I would be careful.

This is a very short essay and needs more reliable sources than Wikipedia.

Far too short... Far too nothing...

you've been on the pending list for ages and you have got way better ratings than me...but how come you're still on the pending list?

I think these are all copied from reference, but not his own words

I agree with previous posts, very short but useful and interesting stuff there!


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like title says it would be much better and more interesting if u had elaborated more on those software

The beginning seems to be clear but it's only a few definitions. More details will make it very appealing.

Some typos and format problems. but it will do.

Why is this garbage still here? Throw it in the trash where it belongs, its been here long enough.

it is very useful, excellent work!

The work you've done already is good.(I lied I meant very good) You just need to extend the amount of words by a lot.