Emotional Breakdown
Ciera L. Wardlow
November 1st, 2003
period 3
What makes the human race so spectacular is its' ability to express; thoughts, feelings, and emotions. There are many ways to express oneself and the most prenominate form is communication, but your emotional reaction to life is just as vital. The four basic emotions that a person will feel in his or her life time consist of, happiness, sadness, fear, and anger. Most people will explore every part of these emotions within themselves while, others will struggle to understand them. Emotions are a reaction to a persons environment as well as an expressive response to how you feel in your inner-self. A human beings personality derives from their emotions even if an individual tries to suppress their emotional feelings.
Emotions are the key to a human beings mental fulfilment. The emotion that is the most important to a human beings personality is happiness because it's a feeling of great pleasure.
English: Managing emotions - Identifying feelings
English: ubuntu for human beings
EmotionA person should absorb more happy occasion than any other, because if a person never lets themselves be happy ,then he or she will be quite a miserable individual. Happiness is a response to something good that happens and affects you. Although, life can give you lemons sometimes you can still be happy, because it depends on you and how you can control your own emotional status. Happiness is an illuminating feeling that brings smiles and laughter. There are many different types of emotional reactions that would qualify as a happy emotional experience. While, most human beings will experience every emotion at least once, happiness is the emotion or feeling we should try to experience all the time. For happiness is the best feeling one will ever experience.
While, happiness is the best emotion to have, sadness is the...
Try not to be ambiguous!
the essay was good but here and there it became kind of ambiguous due to the lack of proper english grammar form!!
Try not to shift from plural to single nouns especially within a sentence!
For example:
A human beings personality derives from their emotions even if an individual tries to suppress their emotional feelings.
What you goal should be is to have a clear, straight to the point and concise essay which will be easy for the others to comprehend! Well, the previous sentence was not as clear as you would like it to be! You have to read it twice since you say A human being\'s personality and then you say THEIR emotions! do you notice where your mistake is?
Hope you will keep that in mind in the future!
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