Creative writing assignment - describe yourself in three adjectives
- Date: November 07, 2007
- Level: High School, 11th grade
- Grade: A-
- Length: 2 pages (495 words)
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To describe myself in three adjectives, one of the words would have to be that Im ambitious. To be ambitious is to be eager and greatly desirous. For example, I play on an ice hockey team and lots, if not all, are all skating drills where its really tiring, but yet, the day before practices, I am always excited and eager to play the next day, where I no that many other players hate going to practices. Another example would be that I make many goals that I always try my best to achieve which most of the time motivate me to try even harder. For example, at the beginning of grade seven, I made a goal to be ...

... that someone puts in me. If someone has enough confidence in me to tell me something or ask me to hold something for him or her, it shows me that they have trust in me, to me, that is a big complement, and if I were to break that trust, I would lose that complement forever. For example, my parents trust me enough to stay home alone from time to time, and the only reason they do is because I havent broken their trust before.
The third and final word I would use to describe myself is athletic. Unlike the other adjectives I used, athletic is a word that always pops into my head whenever I 
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10 November, 2007 08:12:43
When describing your self try to state your weaknesses and strength for example "ambitious" should be classified as either a strength or a weakness,etc. But good essay overall.
13 November, 2007 17:05:37
This essay is a job well done. One tip could have been not to start every paragraph with the same structure. eg. The second word i would use to describe myself is:.... You could have started a paragraph a bit differently. Overall, it is a good essay, that I would use if need be. =]