Death - the inevitable
Despair - the loss of hope
Darkness - the escape
Death - we must accept
Despair - we must avoid
Darkness - we must embrace
Death - the end
Despair - the pathway
Darkness - the beginning
Death - everyone on this earth will experience
Despair - will affect each and every one of us
Darkness - will always be known well
We are all going to die.
Until we accept this we cannot truly live.
Death should not be feared.
The fear of death leads to despair.
By despairing we lose hope.
Losing hope, we search for comfort.
Comfort, to be found in darkness.
Darkness is the solution and the problem.
In darkness we escape.
We came from the darkness and return to it.
Death - the beginning
Despair - the process
Darkness - the end
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I loved the way the rhythm of death, despair, and darkness emphasized the darkness to darkness cycle of life. I think you did a great job with the harsh \'d\' sounds because it gave off the feeling that there is no escape from the whole process! However, I didn\'t quite follow when you mentioned that we came from darkness, yet death is the beginning. Also, by writing that death should not be feared, as it results in despair, but despair is part of the cycle, are you trying to convey that it is human nature\'s inability to overcome whatever follow that disables them from doing what they should that causes their suffering? Or maybe I should just get more sleep and read it again later!
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