"I don't want you back" - A poem about Domestic Violence.

this is truly a fantastic piece of work.

very emotional and thought-provoking, while letting you express what you wanted to.


BTW, about the song, there is a song called "Don't want you back", but is nothing like this poem, except for that one line.


this poem expresses your deepest feelings and emotions. don't worry about what the other reviewers say, your poem rocked.


VERY WELL DONE!

this was a really good piece.. it does in some ways resemble the song they're talking about but not enough to think it is based on the song.. great work, it really makes ya think

This is a really touching poem, and after recently finding the strength to leave an abusive relationship, I can relate to everything you just said. It doesn't sound anything like that song they are going on about and I have to say it was brilliantly written. Keep writing to get your views out into the world. ROCK ON!!

Beautiful. I myself love poetry. This expresses full meaning. lol, for some reason, I had that song, "i don't want you back" playing in my head the whole time.

What song?I don't know any song that sounds like this. If there is a song,it was unintended. All my works are original and plagarism definitely isn't my thing. I do not appreciate your comment as it greatly insults what I put out my mind to create.

Congratulations to you for expressing your deepest feelings without shame. Sometimes a frank discussion of an issue like this is difficult and embarrassing, but you are a model to others. Shameless self expression such as this can center both the reader and the writer.


I wonder how many others who are in the grip of domestic violence will be inspired to exit an abusive situation simply from reading your work. I commend you for your courage. Very nice job!

nice poem even though it slightly ressembles eamons song fu!# it but i still believe that you wrote it nice work very touching

How could I call this. Remix? Rip-off?

It would be good if it was alone, if the real song (which, by the way, I don't like) didn't exist. But if something extremely similar to this exists already, I can't help it but disapprove of it.

Nice poem, I agree, it doesn't sound like the song at all.