My Educational Progress
In my life I've been to many private and public schools. I also have been put out of quiet a few. No one ever believed that I would make it this far; everyone thought that I would not make it. But, I proved everyone wrong obviously they did not know what they were taking about. I am so proud of myself for accomplishing something that I could have done in 2002.
My bad behavior has always been a problem way before I even began to attend school. I really became a troublesome kid just around the age of three years old. I got put out of preschool for terrible behavior. All I used to do was fight. Even though I had terrible behavior I always was smart. I always had straight A's, and stayed on merit roll and honor roll all the way up until the eighth grade.
As soon as I got to the ninth grade it was over. I began coming home with D's and F's. All I wanted to do was cut school and do what I wanted to do. I used to cut up on my mother even though she would give me any and everything. I went everywhere and did everything that a regular teenager would do. Despite me not going to school and bringing home those terrible grades. I went to Disney World every summer. I stayed out of town.
Before I had my son I attend Life Skills Center of Cleveland, but that did not work either. I could stay woke during class and I could not wake up and go to school everyday. That's when I found out I was pregnant. I felt as if I being tired all day everyday made me not want to be at school,
Educational Progress
You should have told us what "this far" means when you first mentioned it. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that, a pretty good personal essay. A good encouragement to those who think there's no hope for them.
Oh ya...one more thing...the title should be "My Educational Progress." It'd make it more clear to people about what this paper is about.
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