The year 2069... Chaos reigns... Every day is dark and cold. It used to be very hot once. But everything has changed. There was a war. Many people died. Only a few survived.
Marina was getting ready. As a 21 year old young woman, she was tall and shapely. Long dark hair covered her shoulders. Her deep blue eyes looked out the big window. It was dark in the room, but she knew where everything was. She had to leave. She couldn't stay. She didn't have anything back here anyway... just the house and horrible childhood memories. Her parents were killed during the war. They sacrificed their lives in order to save hers... Marina took the suitcase, which contained all her life: photo albums, videos, clothes, old toys... she forgot to take another photo from the wall. It was the photo of her dog. He was killed the same day as her parents.
But it wasn't his fault... they didn't have to kill him... he was innocent...
The sky became even darker. It started raining. Marina took her car and left. It wasn't an easy decision to make. She felt like a part of her "world" was still in that place... the rain stopped. Thin light beams were trying to escape from the small holes in the sky. Some did, but most of them did not. She reached the building. The walls were white and tall. Most of the windows had light in them with small grey shadows moving inside. The gate opened and Marina parked the car at the same old spot. She entered her code number on a small screen and a second later the big door opened.
It was busy inside. Everyone was at their desks. All the people in the hall were around the same age...
Good job.
I really enjoy your story. Good imagination.
The details of the room, the photos, the dog... make me feel like I met Marina somewhere.
Love the ending part as well. Do u really think the Earth's coming to an end though?
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