Here is one of things in The Little Prince that relate to my life. The little prince encounters a fox. The fox teaches him a valuable lesson. The fox said, "One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes...It's the time you spent on your rose that makes your rose so important...People have forgotten the truth...But you mustn't forget it. You become responsible for what you've tamed. You're responsible for your rose..." The fox means that material things don't matter as much as people make them matter. The most important things in life are the ties you make with people, and the things you care for, such as pets. We all should be more concerned with our relationships with our friends and family rather then getting ahead of everyone else in life. This lesson I have already learned. I have, for the most part, strong ties with my family, friends, and the Lord.
Some of the most important things are invisible to the eye. Jesus inspired me to write this essay.
Ummm... ok but way too short!
Although your writing style is good, as well as very clear and understandable, your "essay" is not an essay... it is a paragraph!
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