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Appendix 1: Ancient bone flute (40,000+ years old)
Appendix 2: Early transverse flute (10th century)
Appendix 3: European wood flute (1800's)
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Appendix 4: Modern silver flute (2000's)
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Your essay is well-written, interesting and informative. You may want to tighten the body by removing the table of contents. Having said that, the table of contents is a good idea in showing the formatting of the essay. Finally, an excellent job--definitely worth the A.
Coherently written & informative essay...You may want to change format of the "Table of contents" to make your essay look more appealing to eyes...
I really enjoyed reading your essay. I thought the appendices were great too. One thing that you could do is refer to the appendices within the body of the text. Otherwise, your essay flowed well and answered all my questions about flutes. You wrote slightly above a Grade 5 level and a great job. Bravo!
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Hi. Your essay reads well. Your sections are clearly defined. You may want to use more transitions between topics. Your bibliography is extensive. In summary, you have submitted a well-written essay.
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