Talking about oneself may be an easier task for others but for me it is not that easy. And the reason is very simple. Most of the time talking about oneself comes out as a bombastic display of prolonged self-praise. In fact, I am a man of actions thatÃÂs why a clever use of words can not serve the very purpose especially for me. But, in this essay I will try to depict my whole picture in blank and white with its all willingness and ambitions in my particular field of interest. Honestly speaking, learning is lifetime process and the real student is someone who is all time receptive for knowledge and education coming through different academic and non-academic channels. Honestly speaking, it gives me an immense pleasure that I am student, a true knowledge-seeker. Simply, my goal is to use this Masters degree in Computer Information Systems with specialization in Security.
After posing MSCIS program with flying colors, I will go to obtain a position in the Dept. of Homeland Security. The prime purpose of these aforementioned goals is very straightforward as being a patriotic in nature, I feel myself indebted to serve my homeland with my level best.
Now, being an aspirant candidate for MSCIS program, I personally feel that there is clearly a future potential threat to the developed worldÃÂs way of life as cyber technology becomes more integrated and we increasingly depend on it. If we look at things rationally, the question must be asked, ÃÂis it possible yet to be terrorized by a computer? If so, then how?ÃÂ There is a great deal of skepticism as to whether we are currently so dependent on computer technology that it, or the denial of it, could be used to terrorize the average citizen. What could a...
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Whilst I applaud some of your personal sentiments and achievements, this really is not a particularly well written essay.
Some of the phrasing is repetitive, there are spelling errors and an unusual use of syntax throughout. This results in a very unclear piece of work.
With more thought and some thorough editing, I am sure you could come up with a far more impressive statement of your goals.
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