Hanan Elaraby
English 1
Period 6
03/09/04
Ms. Pryor
What I want to do with my life?
If someone asked you what do you plan to do with your life? What are your goals? What would you say to them? I think I have a good idea what you might say. "I don't know yet, I'll get back to you on that." or "who cares? I don't." but there are time when you do know what you want to do.
Like you see something done and you are like, "wow I want to do that." well when you say that at least you have some ideas of what you want to do. Some people have a small idea of what's out there and will know what they want to do. But like I said not everyone is the same.
Take me for an example. I have an idea of what I want to do and where I want to go.
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I can't really explain why I want to be a vet. It is just what I want to do. It's where my hearts at. I don't think I would be a veterinarian unless I really loved it. And I really do. I love animals I want to be able to help them. Not many people love them the way I do. And I just want them to know that I do. They have feelings too and when you hurt them they get sad. But if your nice they will be happy. I know it sounds corny but that is how I feel.
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Goals
You've written an interesting essay on a subject which many people acknowledge is important but few get around to. Goal setting is quite important and those who set realistic goals have taken a first step toward achieving them. I hope you attain all of the goals that you have set out in your paper. Your use of the first person in your essay was appropriate and your candid expressions can be quite colorful. Way to go!
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