Homework too time consuming ans stressful

This fascinating peek into the sometimes frustrating and workaday world of a High School student can serve as a model for any student wishing to communicate real-time feelings to his teacher in an appropriate manner.


There are several ways that the essay might be improved upon: Start or participate in a student Internet poll on homework and the student, research expert opinion on the subject through a topical Google search, keywords "Homework" and "expert opinion" (don't laugh, simple is better). Finally, an essayist tackling this topic might poll his own friends for quotes and thoughts. Teens are insightful among themselves. Then, poll teachers for their opinions as counterpoint.


This particular essay should stimulate future more in depth essays when it is picked up by students as reference.

The only things that I would go back thru the essay and change are the following:


1st

The biggest thing is the use of Uppercase letters at the beginning of a sentence. Most of the sentences are fine but there are a few that require a little change.


2nd

At the end of the last sentence, instead of a period there should be a question make and the reason is that you are stating a question and not making a statement.


I hope that this is useful. Keep up the good work and hang in there.

Overall, this was an ok essay. Had some simple errors that should be fixed. Using personal experience and feelings was good, but could have expressed things better.

This is a good, well written journal entry. I don't think this would serve well as an essay for any class, but I do think that it has the ability to stimulate and provide ideas for other writers.