Hospitality of The Devil

such few words..yet so powerful...i liked it

Dear Final Fanasty,

I rated your poem a poor rating because I feel it was a little too simplistic. Quite frankly, it read like a dark doctor seuss book, which if you're into that kind of thing is cool, but it does nothing for me. Nothing personal, just an opinion.

Mccaddensucks

Interesting piece of writing - disturbing but intriguing.

This is a good piece.i should say the writer has what i call quick and ideal imagination.it is not easy to imagine and write.

The writer is just letting us know that when you don't do the right things,you are completely doome and your soul is of the devil.he owns you and crying will surely not bring you back,had i known will set in but nothing can set you free.you are in for it-"your fates been sealed,your soul is mine"

I like this. It's dark and deep. The fluency of this poem in amazing. It succinct and makes you really think. Great work! I couldn't have done better.

To be honest, the description 'a dark Dr Seuss book' is quiet apt. The style is similar, and it reads and flows well. final_fantasy, take this (Mccadden's comment) as a compliment and not a criticism... Dr Seuss was a genius :)

Thank you, i have writtin many poems such as these for my GCSE english (N.ireland exams) and this being one. I recived an a grade along with all my other pieces. Others certianly see its depth, others dont. Im glad you took the time to rate it and im glad you shared your view on my work, even if it was a bit harsh. I believe that poor ratings are for work that is bad, i mean bad spelling and pure crap. If, like you said it does nothing for you, fair enough, but i didnt force you to read this, and i hope next time your rating my essays, you wont judge them so harshly and try and see them from my view.

It was a cool poem.

I also like this, its dark and deep..haha.