Images, sex and desire in the media.

What people do with their body,is their own thing, however, when it comes down to innocent children being taken completely advantage of is another. I think you should have elaborated on subjects such as this and of those who are in porn magazine, movies, and on the internet, that did not want to be,or was forced to be.

This essay is particularly short for someone in the thirteenth grade! There are a number of grammatical errors and there are many areas where this could be expanded. For example, your first line says "Human body has always been exploited; beauty has always been used to achieve aims" Despite being grammatically incorrect, you do not explain WHO is being exploited or HOW? Has pornography always existed? no - so why did it start? you need to ask yourself these questions and more before you hand up this piece.

first of all I do think that pornography is NOT the best thing in the world, but in my opinion if the people who allow themselves to be exposed are doing it voluntarily, and the people who see it are not young children, there shouldn't be a national outcry. each to his own ya know. Second of all in that last sentence you said it demeans the human BEEN. I think you meant human BEING.

Third, well done; nice essay.

Really interesting. It made me think about pornography and the real value of human body

i liked it but o do not agree with all of it.Because pornagraphy is what sickos do to make money. And that they do what they want to do. and are not forced to do it.

First off - noone is forced to do anything! What you do is your own perogative. Most of the people in the porn industry are doing it to support a drug problem.....and where does a drug problem come from.....internal weakness....inability to say NO! The only people that are threatened into it are those in the human trafficking trade, such as innocent young girls from Romania being sold off, and also young children in the Asian countries such as the Phillipines as well......these are the only ones that dont have a choice....they are usually locked up and submitted to highly abusive behaviour and death threats. These families try and justify selling their own flesh and blood into the porn industry, stating they are too poor and need the money to survive, placing the blame on the Government. The government shares about a quarter of the blame...but the government is not standing with a gun to their heads telling them to sell their children. There are always other honest means available such as cleaning....or something similar. This world is just full of sick individuals and the pornography trade is just the product of it. These are the fruits of the sexual revolution...and the dropping down of sexual taboo, that once kept the globe free from these offensive, denegrating expressions of mental illness that embodies the porn industry... Good topic...Good coverage....Good argument.....im giving it an 84% and a smiley face :)

I thought that overall, this was a good essay. It was too generalized at times, but you make a compelling argument. However, your claim that pornography generates "a series of mental disorders" seems a bit unfounded.