India and it's economy

not suprisingly good, but not bad either

This essay talks mostly about the history of India. Not sure how that relates to the current thriving economy.

Good job on this one.

I would like to suggest that if the writer could mention something about the Indian economic scenario today and how its GDP is growing since independence , downfalls and how it is emerging as a developing economy it would be more beneficial to the users of CheatHouse.

Although the essay is good and informative. Thank You.

The essay is only history and doesn't speak of today's situation.

this was very useful information but the words did not flow

this is good essay but too old now

the situation now is surprisingly different

maybe we can cut some history and add some economy in it

or at least change its category

Overall this is a okay essay. The essay itself is pretty good but it is not about the economy. This is more of a history essay with a lot of good facts. It would have been better if the title was "History of India."

it doesn't really go anywhere. I think this one missed the subject and could be improved significantly, but the writer's knowledge of Indian history is evident

There was a lot of information, but the information doesn't follow the thesis, and the paragraphs dont lead into each other. It seems more like a conglomeration of facts than it does an essay.

This essay looks more like the overall view of India's history and its invasion. Should have been more focused towards how the economic fluctuations have been maintained and manoeuvered throught its long history. Also more focus should have been paid to mentioning the economic policies in different periods and how they could have been improved if not changed.

this seem like you didnt write it .. it looks like something you copied and pasted

This essay provided some good info, but was disconnected. It feels like im reading from an encyclopeida.

Not nearly what was expected, more detail and get to what your saying

the writer prob. comes from an east-indian derived background. this doesnt seem like an essay at all it's just a bunch of facts.

You beat around the bush a lot. Some editing would do this paper nicely. But it looks like you know your stuff

I thought the paper could go into a bit more information on the actual thesis topic but the facts were good.

This essay brought many things that i didnt know to my attention and how i shouldnt take things for granted. It was very descriptive I got pictures in my head of what it must have been like. I learned a lot from this essay and I hope other people do too!!!

don't follow thesis at all. needs work.

I think its just taken out from some history textbook. I dont find any references to Indian economy.

Jag

i recently did a paper on india. i thought that yours and mine were similar. i recieved a good grade, and so did you. good job.

This essay is very informayive. It is filled with facts and very well written. The writer gives great isight into India and its culture. A must read if you need to do a paper on this topic

this is a good essay with lots of information, but i dont think you tied it all together very well. in addition, you only wrote about india up to its independence. how about how the economy thrives on the movie industry in india, which releases over 1000 movies a year? i feel like it is well researched, but you did not include enough information, especially that which deals with contemporary issues (Wipro, the Ambanis, etc.). Good overall - but needs some more detail and conent.

Needs more detail at the end. It looks like you ran out of time. We have all been there.

The writter use of facts was great but i think they changed their mind from what the where going to do. Overall a good essay

Our school doesn't have the traditional grading system but I recieved the highest grade on our system which is a HP!

Thank You 4 good info

good job

Didnt follow thesis/title. However, still very good despite this fact.

Lots of information. Good job.

i think that you have chose a great topic keep up th good work !

thanks. the infomation of india is excellent, just what i wanted...

This essay does not talk more economy about India at all.

I like the topic, nicely done!

Overall it's a good essay but I find you make your sentences a bit to short (especially at the beginning). Try stinging a few sentences together, the overall result will be a bit more flowing. Nice essay, though.

You didn't have to do any references? But yes, it's very descriptive and hardly any analysis..

it seems like a big copy and paste job..

Many of the facts stated were only skin deep. The purpose of many essays is to understand the meanings behing the facts. In the future try to include how theese factors attributed to the forming of modern India. Otherwise, good job.

Seems very rushed, and perhaps copied from some other source? If not, then it is a very well researched essay, but lacks that personal touch that is often required.

Very well organized essay and good use of the facts.

The orginazation and the sentencing seems good.

Very helpful and informative.

Very interesting and informative, good history lesson, unfortunately the title and the content do not match. Non the less quit well researched summary essay on Indian history for beginners.