Make your brain fit

Essay by rickyj968Junior High, 9th gradeA, October 2014

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Persuasive Essay

To proclaim that gym classes help students perform better in their classes. Gym classes provide students with phisical exercise on a consistent basis. It is particularly important for the physical health of students who do not go to any physical activities outside of school. According to some reliable sources, gym classes can help teach student skills that can help them be more active their whole lives. The physical extertion also helps the mind, decrease in behavior problems and demonstrate higher concentration and also improves the student social skills.

Thesis: Gym classes help students perform better in their classes because physically fit children absorb new information better, have fewer behavior problems and demonstrate higher concentration, and improves on social skills.

Topic Sentence one: Caring and helping others

Gym classes help students perform better in their classes because physically fit students will socialize with others better. Gym class is often the only time of day in which students can laugh, talk and play with one another without breaking school rules.

Students are helped to develop interpersonal skills and to reach beyond themselves to others. Gym classes is also one in which students can learn important social cues that will help them interact with others successfully. In gym classes, students could also develop specific social skills such as good sportmanship, teamwork, and following rules and also learning. Sometimes a conflict could also accur between students while playing a competitive game, but a good teacher could guide them in learning to resolve these natural disputes in a positive manner.

Topic Sentence two: Students will have less behavior problems

Gym classes help students perform better in other classes because students will have less behavior problems, they will be in a good mood and focus on the materials they are being thaught...