Money Does Talk
One dogma is now held widely by some persons who claim moral superiority. That is, money is not everything. To some extent, there are some truths in this dogma, however, those people tend to fall into the oblivion of the fact that money is not everything, but without money, we can do nothing. So believe it or not, in this materialistic society, money does talk!
With money, our life can become more substantial. In a society like ours, a higher education is a must. All the citizens want to improve themselves by going to all kinds of training class for fear that one day they will be definitely placed at a disadvantage in this challenging world. There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine, painting, calligraphy and photography. Thus, we have accustomed to paying the fees of education. Meanwhile, we need build up our health. We do physical exorcises and take measures in keeping in good. Other things such as the management power of a joint-stock company, the social status also depend on the money. Well, all these make our life substantial, and at the same time they need our money.
With money, our life can become more colorful. In modern society, we people do not need to worry about the sufficient food and warm clothes. Our attention has been focused on the quality of life. We need money to fulfil our old dreams or our heart's desires. We are listening to the CDs, watching DVDs or films, going to all kinds of bars and KTVs, even travelling the world. Well, all these things also need our money.
With money, our life can become more meaningful. China is a prosperous country, but a developing country as well. Some areas are still in poor condition.
Reviews of: "Money Does Talk"
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You didn't talk about anything but money! You just made sort of a list about the things we need money for and why money is so important. I agree, that we couldn't live without money, but still, it was a bit to repeating. I'm sure you write better next time. No offense!
I see no enthusiasm in your work, give me some ideas, give me reasons! put more life into it, good topic though!
Essay is ok, however as other comments would suggest there is a lack of live in your work. Your views also seem unclear in some places. Not bad though, give it another shot please.
This is an interesting topic to approach, but the essay itself wasn't as strong. I was unsure of which angle you were approaching from. But keep up the good work!
I agree with the issues your raised but i am unsure of your purpose in this essay. Good topic to chose but please explain things a little more clearly. well done.
Not a bad essay and I agree with some of your thoughts but I don't understand what you are doing here. It was not very well thought out.
I didn't like this at all. You didn't explain very well and you left me wondering what was the point of you writing this.
Good job! I share the same opinions about money, it can't buy everything yet we use it so much in our everyday life.
I agree with most the others on this one, I dont know where you are going , I do understand nowhere without money.
Nice work, greatly said...
I'm a true beliver of money cannot get me everything, but I cannot get anything without it.
The question brought up in the essay is a good subject, but you need to expand on the ideas, not just on eshort paragraph. Link all the ideas together.
Not too bad, although it displays trite examples of our society as a whole becoming too economically dependent. Try not to speak of the general public as a whole. Try to narrow it down a little more.
interesting opinions on society
You may want to try a different topic.
in this essay the writing explains that money could own the world which is sadly somewhat true people kidnap for money,blackmail,rob and many other things
That is a very weak essay, i hope you'll write the better one.
What kind of essay this is. No clever ideas at all! Why the "devote organs" appear in this talk? Please write good cleaver essay next time.
This essay seems to lack some more examples other than just talking about china.
Some people criticized your writing in some comments above. But I love it. It is the reality. A person can become a better one with the help of money. Why all we say that " Money is nothing" whereas we all want it, lack it and work so hard to make it. It is not evil to earn money and make the life more beautiful :D So I like your idea when you say "plz don't be the salver of the money". The most interesting essay I have ever found in this web.
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i agree with the issues your raised but i am unsure of your purpose in this essay. were you trying to persuade me to think that way, or mearly inform me of your opinions. good topic to chose but please explain things a little more clearly. well done.
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