My favorite high school teacher was Mrs. Kappes. She was my music teacher and the leader of our choir, in which I was a member during high school in Germany. Mrs. Kappes was a little, thin woman with black, short hair. She was a great teacher, because she didnÃÂôt play favorites, believed in all of us and was a musical genius.
First, Mrs. Kappes had always interesting and creative topics for her music class. And when a topic was kind of boring she had every time an idea to make it fun. We worked in groups in class or at her place. We studied for musicals (like Cats, Phantom of the Opera, My Fair Lady) and every one of us had a part to act and sing. When we finished studying our parts, we had a "creative evening", where all our families, friends and teachers came and watched our play.
Secondly, Mrs. Kappes believed in our musical talents. She invested her free time for giving singing lessons after school or during our brakes. She taught us to be self confident with our voices and how to use different techniques to improve our singing skills. She told us every week, that we all have great talent and it felt really good, that she had such a confidence in our musical abilities.
Finally, I can say that Mrs. Kappes was the best teacher and she really cared about us. She helped every one in her class to improve our voices and be more self confident on stage. Also she taught us techniques, so that we were able to train at home alone. She was the person, who inspired me to make a singing education. I really hope, that there are other teachers like her, who are a inspiration for students and their...
Good Descriptive Essay
The writer fulfills the requirements for this descriptive essay by describing in detail and with concrete examples qualities Mrs. Kappes possessed. In doing so, she explains why this is her favorite teacher.
Although this essay may not have much use for others (unless they are writing an essay about Mrs. Kappes or they are writing about their favorite teacher and use the above essay as inspiration for what qualities they could list about their teacher), it is still well-structured and the main topic of this essay is convincingly corroborated throughout the body of the text. The conclusion ends in the word "finally" which is discouraged in some formal essay-writing classes but in this case, it is appropriate because the writer uses this word to signal the end of her essay and the concluding remarks.
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