As I smell the aroma of well-made food, feel a warm sensation; I realize I am in my kitchen. That is where I spend many enjoyable hours of my life. There have been countless good memories while being in my most favorite place, my kitchen.
The first time I stepped into the kitchen, it gave off this special warm feeling that no other room gave to me. The wallpaper is a nice tint of white that makes the room feel very cozy. The lighting is always adequate because there are numerous lights and there is a big window in front of the sink. The large sink always reminds me of some funny times I had while using it.
One summer morning I was washing the disgusting dishes and I noticed that some of the water fell onto the floor. As more water kept falling on the floor, I continued washing dishes.
Eventually I got sidetracked and went to another room for some reason. Not remembering that water was on the floor, I rushed into the room. As I slowly ran towards the sink, I felt wetness under my feet and slid back. I fell hard on the tile and slightly hurt my back. I got up and laughed at the situation and continued my dishes. I have had many water fights in my kitchen while using the sink. All of them were very fun, but the most fun I had in the kitchen was from making delightful food.
My most favorite food to make is spaghetti. The process that is taken to make it is very fun. Firstly, I boil the water and then put the raw noodles inside the boiling water. I then start to cook the beef. As I am cooking the noodles, the spaghetti sauce is being...
"My Kitchen. This is..."
'My kitchen is to repetetive in the beginning. You could have replaced 'very cozy' to 'extremely/astonishingly cozy.' Some other words could have been replaced with better words, better diction, but overall it was fine. The essay also seemed too simple (writing was to simply written), didn't seem like a Senior's work.
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