Note this is a stream poem, it is supposed to be like this, it is supposed to repeat its point over again
Agony. The pain. Leave I don't want you. The pain. Screams. The pain. Go away. The pain. Just go away.
The pain. It's here. It's there. The pain. I can scream. The pain. But it's still there. The pain. I can hear it in my ears. The pain. All over the walls. The pain. Blood shot eyes. The pain. Staring into nothing. The pain. Staring into every thing. The pain. Seeing all. The pain. Tearing into the walls. The pain. Can't hide. The pain. The heart ache. The pain. Feeling so used. The pain. It engulfs everything around me. The pain. No feeling enters my body. The pain. Crying for someone. The pain. Crying for help. The pain. The dark light comes. The pain. All senses are failing.
Pains briés
Pain
Pains briésThe pain. All thoughts leave slowly. The pain. Everything is a blur. The pain. My heart slows it's pace. The pain. The dark comes closer. The pain No thoughts enter my mind. The pain. Everything is dead. The pain. Including me. The pain
Death or pain!!!
This is however a depiction of how death comes up.From pain to pain until every where blurs and the pain dies along with the one feeling the pain-"every thing is dead,the pain,including me"
Cool work but very annoying.It is because one is compelled to pronounce pain on and on for 31 times.see if in your next poem,you can reduce the number of times the key word comes up.cool!!
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