My Life Equals A Heartagram
Do you know what it is like to have an unbreakable heart?
Yet, someone still finds a way to try to tare it apart.
Do you know what its like to stand so tall?
But somehow something so simple made me fall.
Do you know what its like to smile everyday?
Then one day to feel miserable in everyway.
Do you know what its like to feel what I feel?
Wondering if this is truly real.
well I know what its like
That's the definition of my heartagram life.
My life is the heartagram beneath you.
Feel my breathe underneath your shoe.
You are the one that causes me to collapse
You are my relapse.
We have been through the curves one million times before
I feel no taller than the floor.
Description dealing a durable death
Give back my heartagram breath.
Devices:
Metaphor "My life is the heartagram"
Hyperbole: "We have been through the curves one million times before"
Alliteration: Description dealing a durable death
Rhyme scheme: AB
Good but useless
This is a beautiful poem but it isn't going to be of use to anyone, including those looking to see how to write a poem.
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