"Stretch Your Senses"
Have you ever experienced an overload of every sense at once? Well, live concerts can almost take you there. I went to Lubbock to see a Pearl Jam concert in the fall of 2000, and it was truly a festival of sensory overloads. This memorable two hour experience was thrilling and unique at the same time. My body felt as if they stimulated it in every area to its complete capacity.
As the lights dimmed and quickly went out, the place started to rumble with excitement. Pearl Jam started with a real hard rocker which just sent everyone into a frenzy. The stage seemed to breathe mist and smoke as the band played their electrifying set of songs. The level of sound was astronomical. The decibel level was on the threshold of pain. The music roared through the streets for miles, outside the coliseum. Every time the bass drum was struck, I could feel the repercussion in the organs within my chest.
It even made my teeth chatter. The concrete floor beneath me seemed to move with the beat of each song. This professional act put off a vibe of intensity and perfection which lingered in the air.
The number of people was enormous. I had to actually become one with the people next to me. The crowd refused to allow any personal space. We were all packed in there liked caged wildcats. I had to move as the crowd allowed or insisted. Everything was done as a group. There were no individuals here. It was only one group of crazed fans fighting for that one glimpse of their favorite band. The crowd would shift as the set continued on. This only allowed me to move closer to the front. As you can tell, I was packed...
Too much story.
I'm sorry to criticize, but what you would call an essay here seemed to be more of a story. It was a very well writen story, but fact and opinions must be present in the essay. I just saw what was in your eyes. I hope o see more of your writings, but as essays, not stories.
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