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  • HMm

    don\'t use i do not think, just get straight to the point, a little bit short, but not bad
    • 12/02/2004
    • 20:04:40
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad but could be better

    You should put the point your trying to make in the first paragraph so it could grab the reader\'s interest right away
    • 04/11/2003
    • 17:01:36
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.