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  • Good topic

    I liked this the title was also cute too.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 10:16:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay no

    Riddled with spelling errors.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 10:14:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Agreed

    This is oddly written.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 15:17:22
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Really great

    Great job on this. Kept the subject interesting.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 12:15:22
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool idea

    I like the format that you chose. It was really interesting to read.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 12:14:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I would expand on the beginning a little bit.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:20:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Really well done

    I loved it. There were a few spelling issues but other than that it was really great.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:19:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Random

    What format is this supposed to follow?
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:14:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Watch your sources

    Wikipedia is really not where you want to get your info. Most professors will freak out if they see that.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:11:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    This is really well done! Great work!
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:10:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good topic.

    I think this is a good start but you need to expand it a bit.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:08:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good topic

    Weird formatting you need to fix that though.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:06:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    I liked this! I really enjoyed how even though they are both so different they still had much in common.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:05:27
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    Awsome topic! Great work!
    • 16/10/2006
    • 10:03:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Really well written

    I'm impressed!
    • 15/10/2006
    • 09:34:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    I also do not like this book at all but this is really good essay.
    • 15/10/2006
    • 09:33:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Decent

    Great start...I would expand this it is a worthy topic.
    • 15/10/2006
    • 09:32:30
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • This is not college level work.

    This is not college level work.
    • 15/10/2006
    • 09:30:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good topic!

    I think this is an awsome topic you really lay out the pros and cons!
    • 15/10/2006
    • 09:27:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    I liked the way you wrote this!
    • 15/10/2006
    • 09:26:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    really helped me out thanks
    • 13/12/2004
    • 09:33:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • WOW

    Excellent essay, The work of Atwood is very hard and intense. i think that you did an excellent job.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 08:16:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I read the article you based this on and I think you did a really great job.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 08:15:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Off to a good start! This has some good thoughts but it is really short. Expand on the idea.
    • 15/11/2004
    • 08:13:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • OKay essay

    Terrible Format...Check it and resubmit it its really hard to read it.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:52:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Good work on a tough topic. I learned alot.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:51:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This essay is well written. Great JOb!!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:47:56
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    The format is off but otherwise it is decent
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:46:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • WOW

    This essay shows alot of time and thought went into it. I like the topic. Good work!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:45:18
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Though I do disagree with people who do not support abortion I found this to be very well written and thought out. It seems that you are very passionate about the subject. Keep up the good work.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:42:49
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Good work. It is pretty informative. I think it would flow a bit better if you used an actual thesis statement.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:39:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I'm a history buff and I learned some new information from your essay. Good work!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:37:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good topic

    You choose a good topic. I think if you rework the grammar you have the basis of a good essay here. The personal insight in the essay is good but I think it would be better in the beginning or middle as opposed to the end.
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:36:28
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    This essay shows alot of research and thought went into it. Excellent Work!!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:34:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    This essay is excellent. It is very well written. Great job!
    • 14/11/2004
    • 12:33:21
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent essay

    helped me so much thanks
    • 12/04/2004
    • 11:36:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good ideas

    spelling and gramatical errors but if you fix them it will be excellent
    • 12/04/2004
    • 11:35:05
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    weird format, alot of typos
    • 29/03/2004
    • 16:50:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    I like the topic that's a cool idea. lots of interesting facts, great job.
    • 26/03/2004
    • 10:06:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    strong stance, even if people dont agree with your politics they will respect this essay
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:21:33
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is really great it brought up issues I had never thought about in reading these novels. excellent job
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:20:01
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done

    really well written, interesting enough to keep readers interest
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:19:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A bit short

    decent..incorporate more of your thoughts or feelings maybe add more of a background for readers not familiar with the story
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:18:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great topic

    very timely topic. your facts were very well supported by evidence. keep up the good work
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:16:57
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good start

    I like what you have here so far. I think it could really benefit from being expanded on. Go with the ideas you have no and tell the reader more.
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:12:10
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is a really well done essay. your references are awsome great job
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:09:46
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    overall the structure of this is rough, got through and pare it down more isnt always better. overall it's decent
    • 24/03/2004
    • 12:08:46
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Awsome

    great essay helped soo much thanks
    • 22/03/2004
    • 09:50:18
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this topic is done alot, perhaps you were trying to be different with that beginning..revise it
    • 21/03/2004
    • 14:55:40
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    nice work with a very contreversial subject matter
    • 21/03/2004
    • 14:52:44
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Agreed

    I agree with the others if you dont cite sources for any of it by the wording it will look like your not doing it for a reason..that they are not your own thoughts
    • 21/03/2004
    • 14:51:43
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Um

    I wouldent start with our fathers..it's seems inclusive and perhaps a bit sexist...
    • 21/03/2004
    • 14:50:11
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    I don't think the format is great improve on that
    • 11/03/2004
    • 15:55:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    cite the quotes in the correct format and you have yourself a winner
    • 08/03/2004
    • 11:37:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    this is well written and well thought out. I dont see how any teacher could give this less than an A. Solid work keep it up
    • 08/03/2004
    • 11:36:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • This is really great

    excellent work...make sure you cite all your sources
    • 08/03/2004
    • 11:34:24
    • Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Soso

    I've seen better..Ive seen worse...a read thru when you finished could have def fixed up alot. This is C material at best
    • 08/03/2004
    • 11:33:02
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • This is terrible

    Holden wasn't in college he went to Pency Prep- Prep school in highschool. This is mistake riddled. Have you even read the book? The ending!!! OMGGG that's not why it has that title. it's because after Holden eats with the nuns he sees a poor family and one of them is singing it...Catcher in the Rye was a song.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 12:00:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good story

    check out the grammer and you will have a winner!
    • 28/02/2004
    • 11:52:08
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Um

    did you actually write any of this on your ow nor are you just citing contreversial authors and texts?
    • 23/02/2004
    • 11:19:58
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    so well written!! This is a really excellent essay
    • 23/02/2004
    • 11:18:27
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    this is a great topic now because there is so much concern over carbs
    • 23/02/2004
    • 11:17:35
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    I disagree with the last comment..sadly a nicotine addiction is not mearly mind over matter I agree a strong desire to quit can help but it is also a physical addiction.
    • 23/02/2004
    • 11:16:39
    • Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is really well done. This is one of the better essays I have seen lately.
    • 15/02/2004
    • 12:04:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Decent

    I thought with this title you would be focusing more on the political side of the tobacco ban. This title is very misleading, maybe you need to reconsider it.
    • 15/02/2004
    • 12:02:50
    • Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    this is extreamly one sided...maybe add a bit of the other,
    • 15/02/2004
    • 11:59:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good maybe even great if you check into the grammatical errors and watch your use of quotation marks.
    • 15/02/2004
    • 11:57:23
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    very well written. Keep up the good work. many essays I have read on this poece are trite repetative and or boring your manages to be none of those. Bravo!
    • 27/01/2004
    • 20:00:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Decent

    some major grammatical errors but all in all it is a good essay on a contraversial topic.
    • 27/01/2004
    • 19:56:53
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    People can see your point if they don't agree with your opinion. Major spelling errors!!
    • 26/01/2004
    • 19:58:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I like the way you used real cases in your paper. you misspelled Anorexia in your title though.
    • 26/01/2004
    • 19:55:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    you could add to the interest level for this topic by citing real cases from medical journals ect. otherwise good work!
    • 26/01/2004
    • 19:53:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is such a through display of data. even though the topic is so tedious you have managed to make it somewhat interesting. Keep up the excellent work!
    • 26/01/2004
    • 19:52:06
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    Seems very well thought out and the facts are seemingly very throughly researched. Excellent job!
    • 26/01/2004
    • 19:50:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I noticed you did not write anything about the possibility of one of the pincessess surviving the attack. It was good but, if you needed more it would be a good angle to explore.
    • 26/01/2004
    • 19:47:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    even if someone is not familiar with Plato or his theories they will be able to get the general idea from your excellent paper.
    • 26/01/2004
    • 10:34:05
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good thoughts on an intense and somewhat unusual topic.
    • 26/01/2004
    • 10:32:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    this is a really good essay. it is well written and seems to be very well researched. Great job!
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:36:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done

    different spin on a play that has been read for so long. I like what you did with it.
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:33:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    this is very well researched it really ties the topic and the materal together in an articulate and well thought out way.
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:32:09
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    articulate, interesting topic..why is the title capitolized?
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:29:29
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great topic

    very relavant and important topic keep up the good work.
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:27:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    what about the ability of the untrained eye to appriciate graphic and surreal art?
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:23:17
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    very well written I agree with your assessment that the monstor was nothing more than a product of his creator's spite.
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:21:23
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The title was a bit misleading you should incorporate into it that the paper is about Douglass but otherwise very through and well thought out.
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:18:13
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sparta

    Spartans also would leave babies that were not in perfect health outside the city walls to die. I couldent find anything citing this but I took a class so I'm sure it's availabe somewhere.
    • 25/01/2004
    • 13:16:14
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good for your age..if more material is needed there is tonsss on warhol!! good luck
    • 03/12/2003
    • 15:43:12
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Awsome

    I love the style you wrote it in. Very well done.
    • 03/12/2003
    • 15:42:09
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    great topic terrible format
    • 07/11/2003
    • 08:44:05
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good job but you should add some quotes from franklin he was an absolute master orator
    • 05/11/2003
    • 16:13:26
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Format

    excellent paper i really felt the emotion you put in. i think the format is a little off but otherwise you have got a winner it's def advanced for 9th grade too.
    • 05/11/2003
    • 16:12:13
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    thats really well written
    • 05/11/2003
    • 16:09:11
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    interesting topic and really great paper cho is a comic genius to say the least
    • 05/11/2003
    • 16:08:29
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    pretty decent paper the way you summarized was really descriptive which is important because your whole audience becomes familiar with the film through it
    • 05/11/2003
    • 15:54:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    good job citing but you really have nothing but quotes
    • 05/11/2003
    • 15:51:30
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Also

    ps as you did state it is indeed very consise and flows well
    • 05/11/2003
    • 09:21:05
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    you get a bit off topic in paragraph 5 but manage to get back on smoothly. Since you are clearly supporting the view that adultery is indeed immoral perhaps you should title the paper to include that as there really is no argument for the other side. I understand in this case the other side. keep up the good work
    • 05/11/2003
    • 09:20:08
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    good work. I like the topic. I just think it would look more put together if you did a paragraph on the deaths of Joplin, Garcia, Hendrix ect insttead of at the end of their individual sections.
    • 04/11/2003
    • 10:15:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Um

    you completly ignored the books underlying theme of her homosexuality but other than that not badly written.
    • 03/11/2003
    • 19:12:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Praise and more info

    I loove the atwood quote's. more information you could use about the barbie body dilemma is the grandaughter of the inventor and founder of barbie has publicly spoken about how barbie affected her own body image I'm not sure where I read this but it was recently. Also check on your Marilyn facts a size 14 then is like maybe a 6 in today's sized. Marilyn Monroe was by no means emaciated but, dont portray her as a plus size role model when that is not indeed the case.
    • 03/11/2003
    • 19:08:49
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hoba

    it's well written and your information is up to date. the only negative about this is the somewhat biased account it is. The more fact you have the less opinion you need. I think some revisions are in order but I admire your writing style none the less.
    • 03/11/2003
    • 19:02:09
    • Score: 19 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • Hey

    for this subject it was very interesting. the way you started grabbed and kept my attention for the remainder. only thing is if your going to support one side in this case evolution back it up a bit more. also, the frost quote helped pull it all together.
    • 03/11/2003
    • 18:55:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    I am new to this and your was one of the first essays that I read. It was very well written yet,concise and never veering from the topic at hand I'm impressed keep up the great work
    • 03/11/2003
    • 18:47:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.