Sometimes it helps just to get your feelings out in written words. It doesn't matter if they are jumbled or meaningless to some. Good for you.
- 16/12/2003
- 06:22:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I couldn't work out if you were writing a film review or a critique on BE being gay. Well written though.
- 10/12/2003
- 21:21:38
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You have obviously worked hard on this. Agree with other comments. Great references too.
- 10/12/2003
- 20:08:30
- Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I agree with Hoba. The paragraphs normally stuff up when you submit them on here. A good read. Good effort.
- 10/12/2003
- 20:06:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I agree with all those comments. When you see someone suffer from cancer, or have to care for them, you soon realise how precious life is. Good topic.
- 10/12/2003
- 20:05:04
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
A good subject to pick, however your grammar has let you down a bit. Also reads a bit jumpy. You jump from the weapons and onto tactical warfare and then back to weapons. Maybe should have explored a specific weapon more extensively and concentrated on that, like the MG. A good effort though.
- 09/12/2003
- 20:09:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
to be fair, if you are going to comment on grammar and spelling, you should check your own first. Scrapes not scraps!
- 08/12/2003
- 22:30:33
- Score: 12 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
I liked the essay as i know little about the bill of rights. It will be interesting to see what happens in the future for Aust as it is likely that the Queen will be ditched for a republic. How will our laws and constitution relfect this? Who knows.
- 08/12/2003
- 20:47:57
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Never had them as a pet, but i am sure some younger visitors to this site will find the info useful. Here in Aust we erected a rabbit proof fence many years ago as they were in plague proportions and destroying many crops. So those that do have them need to be responsible owners.
- 08/12/2003
- 20:42:21
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good to see someone with some constructive things to say on this site. Like the others have mentioned, if you help one person then you have achieved something worthwhile. there are many out there who wouldnt know how to wirte such a letter.
- 08/12/2003
- 20:37:59
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Such a terrible time in our world history. Glad to see that people will still write about such evil. Good effort.
- 08/12/2003
- 20:34:21
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I thought you were speaking from your own heart and experiences. How you write about your own love life is up to you. you should not have to follow any particular convention to express your own emotions. Good for you.
- 08/12/2003
- 20:29:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I lived in NZ for 6 yrs where i worked as a triage nurse. i saw the worst of what NZ had to offer. BUT i also met with some amazing people that you have labelled as dumb. I think at 39 years of age, i am more than qualified. You need to get out of the square you live in. If you go into the world with your current attitude, god help you. So dont tell me my opinion is outdated.
- 06/12/2003
- 20:09:21
- Score: 24 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
left NZ four yrs ago
- 04/12/2003
- 02:44:19
- Score: 17 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
I actually lived in NZ for 6 years, but hey there you go. not everyone has your opinion. but you are entitled to it.
- 04/12/2003
- 01:07:31
- Score: 21 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
So narrow minded. I have been to NZ, sure it has its problems, but still there are some good people there. Not everyone fits your catagory of being dumb, by the way did that include you? If you hate it that much, there is always options to leave no matter how much the cost. Try getting a job.
- 04/12/2003
- 00:29:18
- Score: 20 out of 27 people found this comment useful.
yes H, you do seem to have a lot of time on your hands to 'study' so much.... maybe you need to get a life instead. look at the first four letters of analysed.
- 02/12/2003
- 22:41:59
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Agree with hoba. This essay is lacking the shock and punch needed to deleiver a strong argument. Smoking is a very emotive issue, you need to shock people into agreeing with your argument. just look at the anti smoking ads on tv to see what i mean. a lot of your arguments are one senetence comments.
- 14/11/2003
- 07:26:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
hoba have to disagree. Try watching the movies before critiquing essays. plagerism is a serious accusation. The author clearly has seen the movies and refers to his/her own interpretation. he/she has not plagerised anything. the essay does run more like a narrative though.
- 14/11/2003
- 07:19:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
How can you rate your own essay!!
- 14/11/2003
- 07:05:32
- Score: 6 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Having just finished a similar project on resistance, i can well appreciate the effort you have gone to in order to collect the data. If your not studying in this field then you will most likely be bored. I reckon job well done mate.
- 09/11/2003
- 21:41:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I have seen the movie, read the numerous stories, seen the documentries, yet you have managed to introduce a few facts i didnt know about. Good effort.
- 05/11/2003
- 22:30:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I was going to write something... but forgot! No only kidding! Good research has obviously gone into this essay. A subject you dont see much.Well done!
- 05/11/2003
- 22:20:20
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You have let a lot of emotion into your essay. That is great and made me feel your sadness as you wrote. The only thing that let you down was your grammatical errors. You might like to have someone proof read for you in the future. Also dont see the link to Nth American History in the subj title?Good job for your grade level.
- 05/11/2003
- 22:15:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
obvioulsy a lot of reseach has been done on this essay. We need to take more notice of this stuff so we can stop destroying the planet.
- 05/11/2003
- 22:05:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
As you say in your essay you are a victim of such events. your emotions are clearly evidnet in the essay. You did touch on it, but i felt you just skimmed it a bit. That is the cultures that accept this form of relationship. There are many cultures that have lived like this for centuries. Your views i felt were from a western society.
- 05/11/2003
- 18:32:21
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
A well researched essay i thought. Having lived in quessnland and visited the reef on many occasions, you have covered all the main details and effects on the reef
- 05/11/2003
- 18:23:37
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.