Well written and informative. I am actually doing work on abortion at the moment, and most of the arguements I have been considering have been raised here. It also helps, perhaps, that I agree with the pro-choice view.
- 24/11/2003
- 17:13:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
There doesn't appear to be a point to this essay. It just seems to illustrate some information that I would think is obvious anyway. Also, I think that the second paragraph was a little clumsy: it might have been better if you used semi-colons between each item in the list and structured each similarly instead of having them start with a mixture of "to", "because" and "so".:-(
- 13/11/2003
- 15:45:47
- Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Well written and structured, although I think that the conclusion could have been a little stronger. Still, a good essay, and it's nice to see appropriate sources cited for once.:-)
- 13/11/2003
- 15:35:43
- Score: 29 out of 29 people found this comment useful.