I completely agree with you . It's scary that kids nowaday see those pornography online . I hate it when it happens when you just accidentally click on something completely unrelate to pornographics and there it pops up millions of those pics.
- 05/01/2004
- 18:53:29
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Choir room??? I am sorry but I have never heard of such combination of words. Absort?? Is there such a word? Doesn't anyone revise their essay anymore?
- 01/01/2004
- 19:41:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is too repetitive. Most of your sentences does not make sense. Two major mistake: grammar and incorrect use of words. Try to revise your essay before posting it.
- 01/01/2004
- 19:38:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is give me a great understanding of " The Skating Party" It's well done . I like to hear different opinion on a short story, it helps me to think more logically about the essay.
- 29/12/2003
- 14:08:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I can totally relate to this essay, I wish I could write like that. :) OH well, that's not happening in this life time. KEep up the good work
- 26/11/2003
- 19:45:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like this, it's well written first of all. It helped me understand how to write a contrast essay. Keep up the good work. :)
- 26/11/2003
- 19:40:42
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I don't know, sometimes I hate where I lived but most of the time I find it admirable. Maybe you can look at things differently , then you shall see how wonderful they truly are.
- 25/11/2003
- 07:50:19
- Score: 26 out of 31 people found this comment useful.
This worth every mark of 95. I like it . I wish I could write just as well. But, that's never going to happen. Keep up the good work.:)
- 24/11/2003
- 18:35:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like this. Everything seem flow together. THis piece is quite nice. I enjoy reading this, keep up the good work.
- 24/11/2003
- 18:32:41
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is quite good , however, it's very hard to understand what you are trying to say. For example: you title is connect to the story. "Many people do not realize the brutality people had to live through while this melting pot of a country was being forged, but in 2002, " I think it should be "Many people do not realize the brutality which people had to live through. While this melting pot of a country was being forged, in 2002... " You grammar seem to be a little dull. Maybe reread your writing will help.:)
- 24/11/2003
- 18:30:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like this notes. IT's quite easy to read and are fairly informative. I enjoy reading it. Good job and keep up the good work.
- 22/11/2003
- 15:03:10
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This brings up some good point. But isn't it a bit too harsh. Maybe you could commenting both advantage and dissadvantage. That would be fair. DOn't you think so?
- 21/11/2003
- 20:44:27
- Score: 23 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
It is very straightforward and well done. It gave me a more thorough understanding of human cloning . I enjoy reading this article and good job to you:)
- 12/11/2003
- 16:46:27
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I think I could really imagine what you have written. IT's quite beautiful
- 10/11/2003
- 17:36:28
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay , it follows the basic structure of it. However, it has many grammatic mistake such as "Mom's words prove true again and again. " I think you could say "Mom's words has proven to be true over and over." I am no grammar teacher but I feel that maybe you could reread your essay several time over a long period of time . THat way , you will be able to see things more profoundly. Also I notice you like to repeat your point, which is very good. You might however, consider to say things in a different way. :) Good Job.
- 10/11/2003
- 17:32:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.