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  • Confusion of Thesis

    I felt your essay was a great explaination of the plot for the first Gothic novel. However, I became confused within the first paragraph as to what your essay/paper was going to be discussing. It's not clearly stated. You have all this background information which is great, but then you just jump right into the plot of the novel. It's a hard transition and confuses the reader. Other than that, very well done.
    • 28/03/2002
    • 09:59:56
    • Score: 11 out of 19 people found this comment useful.