PLEASE....don't forget about tobacco!!! Also, marijuana is LEGAL in many places, even sold in restaruants and tea/coffee shops!!!
- 17/12/2003
- 02:35:10
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Looks like you got a few of your frustrations out! It was a joy to read!!
- 17/12/2003
- 02:33:16
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I thought that your point would be made stronger if you explained all of your textual evidence a little more extensively. So much textual quotation but such little interpretation.
- 12/12/2003
- 23:19:54
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Hey, good thinking about puting something like this on cheathouse. I'm sure it will help a lot of people. But, be careful of using too many commas instead of periods in the body of your cover letter. Good Job!!
- 08/12/2003
- 08:31:38
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Greek mythology actually plays an interesting underlying role in this play. You should do a little research, it's really cool!!
- 08/12/2003
- 05:13:02
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
If you would have given a number or percentage of re-offenders, it would have made your argument much stronger!!
- 06/12/2003
- 20:30:56
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Well thought argument. It really wasn't persuasive enough for me.
- 06/12/2003
- 20:14:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like how you tied in a slice of your life in this essay.
- 06/12/2003
- 20:05:05
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Good for someone interested in looking into this field
- 02/12/2003
- 04:41:00
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
It's always nice to fit in, but don't ever change who you are just to do so!! If anyone doesn't like you for whatever reason, that's their problem!!!!
- 02/12/2003
- 04:38:27
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
So, the word "thug" dates back to 2000 A.D.??? That's almost a whole 4 years ago!!!
- 01/12/2003
- 03:40:50
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I'm actually wavering on this subject. I wish someone could help me swing one way or the other. It's so controversial, and both sides have strong arguments!!
- 01/12/2003
- 03:32:59
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Hey everyone!! Please take a little time to comment and let me know what you think. If you haven't read the story, I would highly suggest it!!
- 01/12/2003
- 03:29:28
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Hey everyone, could you please give me a little feedback. Let me know what you think!!!
- 01/12/2003
- 03:28:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I liked your story. It kept me wondering what in the hell this mysterious thing was, and I still am!! Maybe you could shed a little light on the subject!!
- 30/11/2003
- 04:51:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I never realized that Cameron Diaz played in The Mask!!
- 29/11/2003
- 22:16:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I got a pretty good mental picture of the pier and its goings-on. It's nice to see something so simple and ordinary broken down into something so important!!
- 29/11/2003
- 22:12:48
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Hey, thanks for shedding a little light on a very controversial subject. Thank god this is not commonplace in the US!!
- 29/11/2003
- 00:11:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Thank you for opening my eyes to a part of the world in which I know nearly nothing of its' history!!
- 28/11/2003
- 23:17:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good paper. Although I totally disagree with you, you did make a strong case. You presented a well written essay.
- 28/11/2003
- 22:39:25
- Score: 6 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
You have presented a well written essay. But, the major discrepancy I have is with your opening paragraph. You tie setting and foreshadowning too close together. Of course they feed off of each other, but are defenetly not interchangeable!!
- 26/11/2003
- 03:40:24
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Hey, pretty good essay. BUT, one can obviously see that Miss Emily keeping her father's dead body for three days is somewhat foreshadowing the demise of Homer. It also supports the fact that she is still old-fashioned, in that she's unwilling to let go of the past
- 26/11/2003
- 02:27:41
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One thing that stood out to me while reading this argumentative essay, was it seemed you spent more time telling your readers the storyline as opposed to backing up your argument. I believe by quoting more specific examples out of the text is a more convincing and is a direct path to your goal.
- 25/11/2003
- 06:45:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I believe that this short story could be seen not only as a tax on the able, but an extra boost, or an equalizer for those less fortunate. I agree with you in that by the year 2081, one will see a different world than Vonnegut depicted. I believe we, as humans, are almost being encouraged more and more each day to differ ourselves from the next guy.
- 25/11/2003
- 06:31:31
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.