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  • Very persuasive!

    I wouldn't agree more , but you have to realize that there are only 24 hours and a n hour lat is a big deal. In my experience i don't really thing that time is the issue here, i mean come! Time management is a big deal, if teenagers knew how to minimize their 24hrs this wouldn't be a big deal. Anyway your essay is very persuasive and ha has a voice your developmental strategies is also flowing.
    • 23/02/2004
    • 21:05:24
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Informal

    try to elaborate more on the resaerch of Uranium, tell us more about it how it is being in use and its History
    • 11/01/2004
    • 16:41:32
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Stress

    So, far your essay is good but, the introduction is a little bit shallow and also there aren't any expanded details that support the examples. try to elaborate more on stress as a whole.
    • 11/01/2004
    • 16:06:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.