The essay has a clear thesis and many supporting points to the thesis. However, you somewhat repeat yourself. All of your information is a bunch of generalizations. Use more statistics and more evidence to prove your points rather than your opinion.
- 28/11/2003
- 01:58:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It is very factual. It changes the reader's perspective of how psychologists are viewed.It has a main thesis and supported points.
- 27/11/2003
- 13:31:53
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This essay does not have a clear thesis, although there is a somewhat clear conclusion.It is a bunch of facts jumbled together.
- 26/11/2003
- 00:18:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay has a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, it does not have a clear main thesis. It is rather a bunch of jumbled pieces of information.
- 25/11/2003
- 17:16:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is indeed very factual and insightful and it has a clear thesis statement and all of the sub-topics clearly support the thesis.
- 25/11/2003
- 17:12:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay! The essay thoroughly analyzed the Great Gatsby thoroughly and it showed me an injustice that does not exist today and he showed how terrifying the injustice was.
- 25/11/2003
- 01:31:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.