There are a lot of references to children and violent cartoons, maybe a proven example or two would emphasize the statement. It is also a very one sided essay, so you must think what the other side would say to it and back it up. If someone who blamed child violence on their homelife were to read this, there would be no responce. If their homelife is to blame, it simply means their parents aren't there to filter their tv viewing, which is altogether another reason for the networks to. All in all a very professionally written essay, it was hard to come up with any suggestions at all.
- 26/03/2002
- 21:32:19
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