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  • Good job

    i think you did a good job on this essay i found it very intresting
    • 08/12/2003
    • 16:00:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this essay has encourraged me to read further in this subject. Great to read and clearly presented!
    • 08/12/2003
    • 15:59:40
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    dont know to much about the subject, but i believe you have covered most aspects and educated me! this work is well written and presented very well.
    • 08/12/2003
    • 15:58:25
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Is there some missing

    nice introduction or plan? would like to have seen what you could have produced
    • 02/12/2003
    • 17:51:36
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent overview

    This is a well written essay, with a clear structure. All aspects covered contain sufficient detail. well done, hope to see more work like it
    • 02/12/2003
    • 17:47:15
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Get in there!

    Excellent piece of work, structure and style made this piece of work very easy to follow. The content was also good, providng a clear concept of the question
    • 02/12/2003
    • 11:51:14
    • Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    detail and structure of essay was very good, i agree with earlier comment on the lack of emphasis. Style of writing was also impressive
    • 02/12/2003
    • 11:47:39
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    impressive work for a 10th grader, i cant believe that they set a assignment that long! congratulations on a good piece of work.
    • 02/12/2003
    • 11:44:42
    • Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Seems Familiar

    I had to answer a similar question in my last exam. I believe you have done a better job than myself, stlye of writing was also very clear and Coherent. My teacher is always trying to get me to write like this
    • 30/11/2003
    • 09:35:53
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.