i think you did a good job on this essay i found it very intresting
- 08/12/2003
- 16:00:51
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay has encourraged me to read further in this subject. Great to read and clearly presented!
- 08/12/2003
- 15:59:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
dont know to much about the subject, but i believe you have covered most aspects and educated me! this work is well written and presented very well.
- 08/12/2003
- 15:58:25
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
nice introduction or plan? would like to have seen what you could have produced
- 02/12/2003
- 17:51:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a well written essay, with a clear structure. All aspects covered contain sufficient detail. well done, hope to see more work like it
- 02/12/2003
- 17:47:15
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Excellent piece of work, structure and style made this piece of work very easy to follow. The content was also good, providng a clear concept of the question
- 02/12/2003
- 11:51:14
- Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
detail and structure of essay was very good, i agree with earlier comment on the lack of emphasis. Style of writing was also impressive
- 02/12/2003
- 11:47:39
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
impressive work for a 10th grader, i cant believe that they set a assignment that long! congratulations on a good piece of work.
- 02/12/2003
- 11:44:42
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
I had to answer a similar question in my last exam. I believe you have done a better job than myself, stlye of writing was also very clear and Coherent. My teacher is always trying to get me to write like this
- 30/11/2003
- 09:35:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.