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  • Good Essay, but...

    This is a good essay about the debate on gay rights and marriage.The writer chose good arguments, and proved every argument with a high degree of effectiveness.The only suggestion that i could make is that the writer should use better grammer."Mormons just won't tolerate it at all." this sentance could have been phrased better.The way the writer wrote the sentence makes the essay seem too casual.
    • 30/05/2004
    • 15:18:06
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.