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  • Hmm

    If your soul purpose of this essay was to tell what happened in the story then it was good. However if it wasnt, there wasn't anyother point or topic sentence.
    • 04/04/2004
    • 23:13:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    not bad... I wouldn't include CONCLUSION and THE IMPORTANCE OF MARKETING ONLINE in your essay though. it should all flow and subtitles won't be necessary.
    • 04/04/2004
    • 22:44:34
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.