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  • Parole Release

    This is a good essay. There are afew minor spelling errors, but overall it is interesting and well written.
    • 29/12/2003
    • 15:27:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The subculture of corrections.

    Very nice essay. Well written and interesting content.
    • 29/12/2003
    • 15:19:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Parenting styles and their effects on children

    I think this is a great essay. It has good style, format, punctuation, and an interesting subject.
    • 12/12/2003
    • 01:26:24
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Never Satisfied

    Could be worded a little differently to catch a readers attention. I'm not saying this to be critical, but make helpful suggestions.
    • 12/12/2003
    • 01:01:18
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Heavens Grocery Store

    Very nice poem. The punctuation needs some work.
    • 12/12/2003
    • 00:49:31
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Children and television

    I think this essay is well written and very true. It has good style and format, that's what new essay writers , myself included, are looking for as examples.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 01:31:20
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Emotional Breakdown

    A few spelling and grammar errors, but the overall content is informative and explanatory. It is an interesting subject to read about and the author makes it easy to read.
    • 05/12/2003
    • 17:41:01
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.