Very interesting analysis on Tim O'Brien's writing. Organization and conventions are great, would not change a thing.
- 31/05/2007
- 11:01:30
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Your ideas were very nice and they made sense. Very interesting read.
- 14/11/2003
- 20:18:09
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I learned a lot.
- 14/11/2003
- 20:14:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay, down-to-the-point and easy to understand
- 13/09/2003
- 23:23:42
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Great Essay. But also, school bullying often leads to one kid that has his life being made miserable. As a result, he snaps and shoots up everyone at school as "revenge." There are many reasons for school shootings (attention? insanity?), but this is what it usually burns down to. "Bang Bang You're Dead" (search for it at http://www.imdb.com) is a wonderful play and movie of the same name that depicts this with great acting. Bullying may seem harmless, but apparently, it's not.
- 21/10/2002
- 20:25:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very well organized.
- 21/10/2002
- 20:20:00
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
There are many sites that disprove your theories.
- 28/04/2002
- 20:33:31
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this essay- it's very informative. Where do you get all this? = )
- 16/04/2002
- 18:29:04
- Score: 15 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
A well researched essay, and has many good points. Good job.
- 16/04/2002
- 18:25:09
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This sounds like a compare/contrast or advantage/disadvantage essay on TV and other media.You need to use more descriptive words. Instead of television, you can say "TV, the tube, blah, bloop, etc, wah, wee". I like elaboration. What are you trying to tell us here? We'd like to know.
- 12/04/2002
- 23:23:59
- Score: 9 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
You have very good points. Good teachers explain subjects thoroughly in the alotted time they have, otherwise the students will be confused and will ultimately fail their classes. This overshadowing doom plagues many high school students as they struggle to understand the nonunderstood. You, my friend, are learning. You are learning that we are all stupi- [gets hit by a teacher]. I'm serious. Nice essay.
- 12/04/2002
- 23:19:44
- Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
This was a well-written essay. Life is something deeper - not about where you come from or what you were... It's who you are : inside! *sniffles* That's so moving...
- 12/04/2002
- 23:15:25
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Confusing and hard to read. It doesn't even look like an essay- more like some sheet of paper with little study notes on it with lil' quotes.
- 12/04/2002
- 23:09:58
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Very well written essay. I agree, thesis may need to be more powerful - don't fly away now : )
- 12/04/2002
- 23:05:46
- Score: 29 out of 29 people found this comment useful.
Drunk driving is very dangerous - and I feel sorrow for those who were affected by it. I think it's illegal, too.
- 12/04/2002
- 23:01:05
- Score: 9 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
This essay contains useful information and clear grammar. It is very easy to read and informative, thank you. I give it a thumbs-up! = )
- 31/03/2002
- 20:50:10
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.