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  • Good job

    this is very easy to read, and very well-organized and also well-citedit flows easily and is well-wordedgood job
    • 01/01/2009
    • 10:12:29
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  • V good:)

    very good! very informing and well organized..but the works aren't properly cited
    • 12/12/2008
    • 06:23:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Summary!

    this is just a summary of the articles you read it doesn't seem to be an essay!
    • 12/12/2008
    • 06:20:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Professional

    this was a professional paper...very well-organized and informative for anyone in this service sector...it was very useful for me..thank u
    • 17/11/2008
    • 22:30:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Comment

    very well written and organized...u have examples to illustrate ur points and everything is cited:)
    • 17/11/2008
    • 22:29:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • :)

    very good, I liked ur conclusion because you keep a window open for future changes...well-argued, and all the citation is there...good job
    • 04/11/2008
    • 11:26:23
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Plagiarism?

    extremely well-argued and well-presented (good organization)...but if red riding hood is right, its plagiarism !
    • 04/11/2008
    • 11:24:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good essay. very helpful if you are an employee. well-argued
    • 04/11/2008
    • 11:21:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • -

    the first part made a good argument, but i think you lost ur reader with the all the legal stuffmaybe it should have been attached as an appendix to this essay and not be a part of it
    • 04/11/2008
    • 11:18:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • My comment

    good essay , but it won't convince someone who is rooting for McCain, because you didn;t argue why Mccains strategy is flawed...you can;t use wikipedia as a source because it's an open source and anyone can edit it...you shouldn't have cited thatother than that... :)
    • 31/10/2008
    • 06:59:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • My comment

    This makes sense to me because I have actually read that article. You make an excellent argument. After all, it does not make sense for a business to pamper everyone just because they are prospective loyal customers...anyways, it's well written and well-argued. But what are the sources you mentioned between parenthesis?
    • 29/10/2008
    • 06:04:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • :D

    I like this story, even though it seems to remind me of little red riding hood or something similar...I liked all the freaky details...and plus, it's well written with good language and style...nice work :)but what does the mom have to do with anything? (although i loved that part)
    • 28/10/2008
    • 01:33:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Liked it

    i liked your story. the beginning was very captivating.great writing style and choice of words..touching story..good job :)
    • 28/10/2008
    • 01:17:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Superb

    A great piece...you're very good with words, the language, the descriptions...everything in this story fits together seamlessly, and you manage to convey the feelings exactly as they are...excellent work
    • 28/10/2008
    • 01:09:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Loved it

    I fell in love with this piece...it really makes a lot of sense and anyone who believes that there is no room for ethics in business should read this...All ideas are well-supported and well-written...good job..it was very useful for me to read this. thank u!
    • 28/10/2008
    • 00:27:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • ..

    the ideas are valid, but where's the separate introduction and conclusion?Separate it into at least 3 paragraphs :S
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:59:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    this is a great story. fantastic twist at the end...great language and everything, except that its 'stake' not 'steak' :Pwell done :)
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:52:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Amazing!

    you have a way with words. very strong descriptions that really set the mood, and very touching details...this was a pleasure to read...thanks to your excellent choice of words
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:29:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • V nice

    this was a short yet touching story. i like the descriptions...the last line is powerful..the dialogue here and there adds a lot of zing to it..well done
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:26:06
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done!

    this was a very interesting essay to read, and it is very well-written..however, you're missing some citations because you used a quote ...:)
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:17:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great :)

    I enjoyed reading this, because it takes a very abstract idea like ethics and manages to decipher it without confusing the reader. the language is sophisticated, and the in-text citations are very well spread out in this paper.well done :)
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:09:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Mmm..

    the topic is interesting, but the writing style is very disintegrated...needs better linking between ideas
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:05:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    well referenced, written in professional language, and well-organized...also very informingwhat more could u ask for :)
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:03:56
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    very well-organized and well-written.usually we have to write a critical reflection about something, but nobody really takes the time to understand what critical thinking really is.this was very useful to me, and I would read it before completing a critical assignment...
    • 27/10/2008
    • 03:02:48
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • ...

    Sorry about the bibliography, it's not clear enough...
    • 19/04/2007
    • 16:47:35
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Point

    I think it's true how the media leads us to believe things about the Islamic culture which are mostly exaggerated or just simply untrue...this kind of stereotype brings cultures farther apart instead of bridging gaps... :)
    • 19/04/2007
    • 16:26:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well...

    This is the first time I've ever read anything of this position...as a person who lives in the Middle East, I'd have to say that u would've been right a few years back from now, but today, this is not entirely true...The devout Islam ur discussing are rare minorities, and the majorities seem to be following the trends of the West...
    • 19/04/2007
    • 16:21:46
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • :S

    Well...I don't think u presented enough evidence to show that it should be legalized, there are many other things you could have mentioned...like revenue enhancement...and the 3rd paragraph is vague...if marijuana were legalized, some would argue that there would actually be less and less people in those centers, and less taxpayer money being spent to keep marijuana users and dealers in jails...
    • 19/04/2007
    • 16:17:23
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Loved it

    This is one of the best essays here on legalization of marijuana...I loved the way it was written, and it certainly got to me..all the claims are well-supported, and it is generally very well written :D Great job!
    • 15/03/2007
    • 04:43:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Marijuana

    Well..although I'm not exactly pro-legalization, u present a fair case...and the quote at the beginning is catchy :)
    • 15/03/2007
    • 04:25:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well...I liked how u stated all the reasons with examples and such...but one problem would be that the sentences are not rich enough..they seem a little lackluster..but anyways, good paper :)
    • 15/03/2007
    • 04:17:15
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good but...

    Pretty informing, but the sources should have been more diverse to make it more conclusive. Well-written and very good.
    • 13/03/2007
    • 15:49:52
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good topic

    I like the topic of the essay..good development with proper references to specifics...plus, the introduction and the ending are good..
    • 13/03/2007
    • 10:36:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • :-)

    Well-organized, clear ideas, and good introduction and ending...but there's room for a little more elaboration..overall pretty good.
    • 13/03/2007
    • 09:37:12
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Easy to read

    I enjoyed reading this essay because the ideas flow smoothly..and I've never seen the movie, but after this I'm curious to see it :) The ending presents a very interesting idea..
    • 13/03/2007
    • 09:25:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Deserves more than a C

    I don't see why this is not at least a B paper...I liked it a lot. The information provided is very useful, and I liked the use of examples in all the right places..the organization is very logical also..good job :) It's an eye-opener.
    • 13/03/2007
    • 09:11:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    Well-organized and clearly written. Good sentence structure. Also well-cited..Good job :)
    • 12/03/2007
    • 22:19:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well written..but the paragraphs are a little out of balance.
    • 12/03/2007
    • 22:15:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • V good

    I really enjoyed reading this..it draws attention to an issue that we all deal with on a daily basis whether we know it or not..Well written and well organized..
    • 12/03/2007
    • 16:41:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • True

    heheheh what was I thinking?
    • 12/03/2007
    • 16:25:01
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I liked the essay..it sheds light on an important issue, and gives good examples to support the claims..But there's a little problem with transition from one sentence to the next in some places...
    • 12/03/2007
    • 16:15:43
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good!

    I really liked the essay, and the way it was written. Informing and well-organized. :D good job
    • 12/03/2007
    • 16:07:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well..your essay starts out very well..the dopamine part is quite convincing, and the quote from the ex-user is a good way to end the paragraph..however, at the end of the essay, u focused on an aspect of marijuana use that is not well-proven yet, so the argument faltered a little.
    • 12/03/2007
    • 16:04:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This essay was clear-cut and to the point...providing definitions and comparisons along with examples...
    • 12/03/2007
    • 15:29:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Simple yet touching

    I loved this poem. The words are simple, but still it is v touching, and changes the way you look at death. Real nice work.
    • 15/05/2005
    • 11:05:08
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting topic

    It's a good essay, but there's repetition of some ideas...but overall, u make a good argument.
    • 06/05/2005
    • 06:39:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The title's not right

    In this essay, you just talked about Eminem's influence, and not rap in general, as the title hints. But anyways, I agree that he has a bad influence on kids and teens, but that doesnt mean he should be blamed. It's the parents job to prevent their kids from listening to such stuff, and/or make them immune to it.
    • 23/03/2005
    • 10:47:06
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • What is wrong with u?

    You don't have to reach the end to know that this story has no point to it. Why would you submit it in the first place?!
    • 22/03/2005
    • 00:32:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very interesting

    I have never read an essay that discussed this topic before. i loved it, and it was a great help.
    • 12/03/2005
    • 08:38:27
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    this essay definitely opened my eyes on some issues which I never knew about before. It's well-researched and ineteresting to read. Well Done.
    • 05/03/2005
    • 14:55:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow! Luv it.

    I loved this essay so much because it was written in a very easy-flowing way that makes the reader hang on to everyword. Plus, the topic is veeeery interesting and humoring! Who hasn't told a lie?! I could totally relate to this because it looks like I wrote it; u put my thoughts in an essay. Thanx! Waiting to read more...
    • 05/03/2005
    • 14:50:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good...

    This is a good essay with a nice topic, it's just not written coherently enough. I had to read the same sentence 2 times to get the points intended. But overall, good.
    • 05/03/2005
    • 14:43:09
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs better introduction

    You did a great job discussing the subject since it's a somehow sensitive issue...However, you need to work on the intoduction and the end cos they seem a bit casual compared to the body.
    • 19/02/2005
    • 18:29:38
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • V Good

    Well, this was a very good essay to read, but what happened to the concept of paragraphs, introduction, ending?? Oh, and you had some spelling and grammar mistakes, but the content is really very interesting to read.
    • 21/07/2004
    • 18:24:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice..

    Even thogh you gave very strong reasons as to why you oppose same-sex marriages and relationships, you didn't give very clear reasons why some people do support these relationships. But overall, I like your style!
    • 21/07/2004
    • 18:13:06
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • My comment

    I think you need to expand your essay a little bit, or divide it into paragraphs.
    • 21/07/2004
    • 18:02:23
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done!

    I really connected with this essay because it is very 'personalized', and it's the sort of thing I might write myself. You know, I can argue with you on some of the points presented here, but that's not the point. You showed me more than one way of thinking about things. V Good Job!
    • 21/07/2004
    • 17:57:03
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Reflective

    This is another one of your very good essays. The beginning was a bit wobbly...but then u turned into a fantastic essay. Good job.
    • 10/07/2004
    • 08:52:03
    • Score: 24 out of 33 people found this comment useful.
  • Enjoyable

    I read this many times in order to know what to say...This essay is fantastic. You really knew how to bring the poem to life and link it to ours..This time, I loved the ending! It was simple yet effective. Good job.
    • 10/07/2004
    • 08:48:02
    • Score: 40 out of 44 people found this comment useful.
  • I loved it

    This was a great essay to read. It is well-written, well-structured and flows very well. Although I think it would've been nicer if u had wrapped it up with one more short paragraph. But overall, very very good essay!
    • 10/07/2004
    • 08:42:00
    • Score: 48 out of 52 people found this comment useful.
  • V. Good!

    well researched...well-written...I loved this essay!
    • 10/07/2004
    • 05:34:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good..!

    This essay was a pleasure to read. It's well-organized and obviously well-researched. Good job!
    • 27/06/2004
    • 07:46:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Delightful!!

    I loved it. Throughout the entire story I was thinking: Why, why, why?? I think you did a marvelous job, and you have a knack for keeping the reader hooked by building up suspense. By the way, I would have loved to read the 1st place story, how can it be better than this one!? You have much greater composition abilities than a 6th grader, so congratulations!
    • 02/06/2004
    • 12:56:59
    • Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Jealousy

    I enjoyed this poem because you used an easy structure, and none of the words were vague. The phrases hold deep meanings. However, it sounded more like a rap song than a poem,when I read it aloud! That's not a bad thing, actually, it made it more enjoyable! Good Job!
    • 02/06/2004
    • 12:44:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I think you did well

    It's a good essay that's right to the point, but you could've improved the chosen words just a little bit. Good work though!
    • 14/05/2004
    • 10:18:48
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Okk...

    This essay was carefully detailed, and could be summed up in less paragraphs.However, it is good one because evidently, you carefully researched it. Next time, try being more to-the-point.
    • 14/05/2004
    • 10:01:11
    • Score: 17 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • Impressive!

    This essay is very well-written and organized. It truly brought the day to life...too bad it wasn't such a good day.
    • 15/04/2004
    • 12:04:28
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • V good essay

    This essay has important information, and is very thorough and well-organized. So, go girls, GO!!!
    • 10/04/2004
    • 10:56:00
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Great ideas!

    The essay is clear and to the point ---I wish my teachers were like that!!--But only one thing: The word teaching is repeated too many times throughout the essay!
    • 10/04/2004
    • 10:49:20
    • Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • It's great!

    THis essay captures all the different views of abortion, and states them in a clear and effective way. It is organized and well-written, so good work!!
    • 10/04/2004
    • 10:42:00
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I found it very deep and analytic. I have read all of the Harry Potter books, and yet I have never thought of them this way. You brought a good topic into light. Good job.
    • 23/03/2004
    • 12:20:24
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Cant be better!!

    All the points that I know of are listed here, without a biased opinion. Good organization and language..great essay!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 13:06:33
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    Good reasons given, and I totally agree that gay/lesbian couples should be allowed to adopt. Well-organized, and great word-choice.
    • 17/03/2004
    • 11:41:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Loved it..

    I like what u did here. This is very explanatory, and I particularly loved the short, touching ending. In general, very good. Oh, but the first few lines frustrated me a bit!!
    • 05/03/2004
    • 14:41:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very creative!

    I'm impressed!! I wonder what my life would be like if that were me!! very creative..!
    • 02/03/2004
    • 14:21:10
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    This is an essay rich in information, which is clear and easy to read. Plus, it handles, in a way, the 2 sides concerning the debate about guns. Good
    • 02/03/2004
    • 14:11:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very informative.

    This essay is rich with information, and is well-organized and easy to understand.
    • 29/02/2004
    • 07:57:49
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good choice

    I think this essay is a v good onw. Good choice of people.I do agree with u that they made the world a better place...Good organization as well.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 15:15:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very touching

    great job!! the essay flows very well, and the story is very well-sculpted!
    • 28/02/2004
    • 15:03:41
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good points

    I have to admit, this essay made me reconsider my point of view regarding school uniforms! After I was with, I am now close to being against! Good points mentioned here...great work.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 06:03:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Amazing!!

    To me, this essay looks complete. There is nothing left hanging in the air...The last paragraph wraps things up in a nice way. What more can I say?? GREAT job!!
    • 28/02/2004
    • 05:47:44
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well above average!

    First of all, interesting topic (and shows). The paper has a good organization and the diction is well-chosen. Good job!
    • 28/02/2004
    • 05:36:14
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome

    I really liked this essay. It truly brings the situation into life...Good job.
    • 23/02/2004
    • 09:32:00
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I loved it

    This essay was exactly what I was looking for...thanx for an excellent essay!!
    • 20/02/2004
    • 09:39:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Where's the ending?

    THis essay is a good one, it just needs an appropriate conclusion/ending. No essay is complete without that. But in a general look, good information.
    • 14/02/2004
    • 05:18:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    This is a very good essay. It is well-organized, with good language and content. It is very informing and helpful. Well done!!
    • 13/02/2004
    • 12:44:55
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job!

    It's a very nice essay, but it needs work on grammar and language, that way it'd be more appealing to the reader. Overall, good job..(what country are you talking about exactly?)
    • 13/02/2004
    • 12:29:47
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • 2 thumbs up!!

    I think you did great on this essay. There are lots of details to back up the issue..nothing out of place! Keep up the good work!
    • 04/02/2004
    • 11:32:56
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs improvement

    The essay is average, and it needs much more improvement to be captivating. The topic is a very interesting one, but this essay lacks the characteristics to keep the reader hooked. Needs improvement on grammar and diction.
    • 04/02/2004
    • 11:19:15
    • Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Great organization

    Great essay in general.Good points: I liked the topic, organization, and contentBad points: just some minor grammatical or maybe typing mistakes.
    • 04/02/2004
    • 10:56:22
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Great content

    I liked it a lot since it discusses a controversial issue. Well-organized, good language, and very informing. Good work!!
    • 03/02/2004
    • 12:56:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well above average

    Short, clear, precise, and to the point. No unnecessary or irrelevant details. I loved it. The ending is pretty persuasive too.
    • 02/02/2004
    • 11:16:08
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Below average

    Language is great, but in an overall look, the subject isn't clear. The first few paragraphs were about gender roles and parental influence, and were very good, but hen things got confusing...
    • 02/02/2004
    • 11:01:28
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • V. Good

    I liked it a lot because it draws attention to an issue that most people don't believe in. However, it just needs a paragraph or two concerning real life stories...You know, many people would reconsider!
    • 31/01/2004
    • 09:29:40
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs more work

    The essay has a good content, but it needs further improvement on sentence structure and stuff. That's mostly it.
    • 31/01/2004
    • 09:21:20
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.