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  • Nice

    you use a lot of quotes, which makes the essay strong. but you need to watch your grammar in some places.
    • 20/05/2004
    • 21:03:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • It was ok

    this was interesting, but you're argument wasn't very convincing. you needed more facts and statistics.
    • 19/05/2004
    • 18:02:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.