I appreciate the fact that you did so much research, you need to stick to an outline, you were random in your thoughts. You also need to find some alternative wording to keep from sounding reduntant.
- 24/04/2002
- 23:05:45
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This Essay contained alot of useful information on alcoholism. I would have like to have seen a few more references cited, but over all a good essay.
- 06/04/2002
- 21:08:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I felt that this essay had a good message, was well written and gave the reader and first hand insight to the real world of alcohol abuse and depression.
- 06/04/2002
- 21:02:02
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.