Focus less on the conditions of others and more on the content.
- 12/12/2005
- 14:27:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well organized essay and good use of the facts.
- 06/11/2005
- 20:55:13
- Score: 0 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is very well formatted and gets to the point.
- 28/09/2005
- 11:14:17
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
it is well organized and worded with good points and arguements to support it as well it is very detialed and easy to read.
- 12/07/2005
- 19:53:39
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Personally, I love computers, so i do not agree with a lot of the content. But it is pretty well stated and organized
- 12/07/2005
- 19:51:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
well worded and organized and very well explained
- 12/07/2005
- 19:47:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.