More or less well written. But i am confused. Is this meant to be an persuasive or an informative essay? Because it felt like it was something in between. If it was meant ot be a persuasive essay perhaps you have have added a paragraph that was arguing the opposite of what you were saying and then dispelled that argument. Otherwise it feels as if your argument is only one sided yet at the same time you're not pushing your ideas all that strongly. Otherwise pretty well written. Well done.
- 18/01/2004
- 23:48:35
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