"In 40 minutes of playing these games, a child will witness over 180 acts of aggression and violence."I was unabel to find your reference so i was wounder where you got this pice of information.Good artical, a little short and it doesn't really say anything about the effects of the violence a child is subjected to during the game.
- 24/01/2004
- 12:56:08
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I did a research paper on this topic a few week ago and it seems some of your facts contradict mine i will recheck then post my paper.
- 22/01/2004
- 15:53:24
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I read the whole thing and couldn't find 1 grammar mistake or a sentence that seemed out of place. This seems to be a well written essay and I hope to see more great work like this from others.
- 22/01/2004
- 15:45:20
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.