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Great Job!
This is a great essay...you really dug deep into the meaning... I especially liked how you compared it to our society
- 22/01/2004
- 17:32:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nice point
while your subject is very interesting, you tend to go of topic and use an informal tone. For example, you seem to wander of the topic of papers and into skateboarding, while expressing your views on parental lectures. It was still very interesting however, but I was wondering what you suggest english teachers assign their students to do instead of persuasive papers... grammer homework?
- 22/01/2004
- 17:20:50
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.