You refer to artwork that we cannot view. It would be more helpful if you attatched visuals for readers to look at. Also perhaps you could put the artist's names in the title, making it easier to search for specific artists.
- 02/03/2004
- 22:04:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was a very humourous and informative essay. The writer put a lot of thought into the paper, but also kept the tone light. Great work!
- 02/03/2004
- 22:00:34
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
The paper is okay. There are a few grammatical and typographical errors in the beginning paragraph. Some of the information is not accurately stated, and there is no source cited section for further reference. There are also citations that seem to refer to pages in a textbook, but are unsure. Also this paper does not address the topic of treatment, and implies that bipolar disorder is a "vicious infirmity that is a slow death mentally which forces one physically to their demise" which is untrue.
- 02/03/2004
- 21:56:24
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very nicely written. The only complaint I would have is with the quoting of the lyrics to Ice Cubes song. Perhaps some quotations would do the trick =) And a citation in your bibliography since music is also copyrighted work, but I'm not sure how all that works. Keep up the good work.
- 29/02/2004
- 22:47:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay for a middle school level paper. Nice details, vocabulary and explainations.
- 29/02/2004
- 20:34:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay is pretty short, and I was expecting something more profound when I was reading it. There is no clear thesis, supporting paragraphs and conclusion. Although you have a great topic for an essay, you are lacking general content and sources to strengthen your argument.
- 28/02/2004
- 02:12:14
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well there is a lot of good advice and content, however this essay looks more like an outline or notes from a class. But it has the potential to be helpful and educate someone interested in the topic.
- 13/02/2004
- 07:20:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay. Good comparisons as well as citing accurate historical events. Keep up the good work.
- 13/02/2004
- 07:19:07
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Great essay. Interesting topic, well explained. Keep up the good work.
- 13/02/2004
- 07:13:20
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.