Martin Luther King Jr. Day is my birthday!
- 20/02/2004
- 20:35:56
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Good job at keeping larger paragraphs instead of having a bunch of small cluttered ones.
- 20/02/2004
- 20:30:45
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Try to relate more ideas into larger paragraphs, you will receive a higher mark :)
- 20/02/2004
- 20:17:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like how you separated the quotes from the paragrapohs and indened them, ytou are supposed to and many people dont bother. good job :)
- 20/02/2004
- 20:15:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Too many small paragraphs, Try to relate more ideas together into larger paragraphs as you will receive a better mark for pointing out relations.
- 20/02/2004
- 20:14:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Im not a huge fan of the semi point form, But I like how you've grouped hte ideas together
- 20/02/2004
- 20:12:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I had wondered how the lyrics went..Now I know! Thanx
- 20/02/2004
- 20:10:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You included some good points in this, but could have developed them a tad more. =)
- 20/02/2004
- 20:09:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.