I like the amount of research that you put into this. Short but sweet. Should be classified as "Super"
- 29/02/2004
- 23:06:39
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
I am pleased with this essay. It is simple, yet convincing. Good Job
- 29/02/2004
- 23:01:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good for 8th grade. I hope your not hypocrite, teens do need to find better things to do with their money.
- 29/02/2004
- 21:07:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Overall, a good essay, but the part about the town hall is more for for relating to time setting not place setting. Just a thought
- 29/02/2004
- 18:25:45
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.